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Shadow-Secrets — On My Way
Published: 2004-11-27 07:40:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description A lie
thats what it is
This lie that I live
Don't take it
They said
Don't break it
We beg
Do your thing
Just be you
But this is it
This is what I want to do
Let me be me
Don't take it away
All I want
Is a life different from yours
Keep it to yourself
Don't shatter my dreams
I'll brake through this haze
Watch and be amazed
  I'm doing it now
     Keep on watching
        Just a little more
          ...Now I'm on my way....
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Comments: 10

ZanarkandAbe [2004-11-27 09:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem, what movie inspired this?

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to ZanarkandAbe [2004-11-27 09:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Heh *ashamed blush* The Prince and Me...I guess you'd have to see it to understand how I got to my thinking chamber again..Its pretty good though in my opinion. ^^

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ZanarkandAbe In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-11-28 08:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Actually, that'w one I wanna see, but I live with two guys, so I doubt I'll get to watch such a "girly" movie anytime soon...

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to ZanarkandAbe [2004-11-28 23:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Aw, tell them they have to watch it with you or....you'll do something horrid!! ^^ j/k but its really good

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ZanarkandAbe In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-11-29 07:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Hope I get to see it soon.

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to ZanarkandAbe [2004-12-01 22:12:55 +0000 UTC]

Me too ^^ tell me what you think of it when you do!

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ZanarkandAbe In reply to Shadow-Secrets [2004-12-02 00:41:46 +0000 UTC]

If I get a chance, I will.

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to ZanarkandAbe [2004-12-02 12:21:37 +0000 UTC]

^^ I'll be here

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proxide [2004-11-27 07:47:12 +0000 UTC]

The ever-interesting theme of the seach for individuality - a tangible poem which applies directly to the senses rather than being too elusive. I like the physical movement of the poem in the end - the return to reality succeeding a grasp of revelation.

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Shadow-Secrets In reply to proxide [2004-11-27 07:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that comment is a keeper of thoughts. Thank you very much for that intensive sharing of thought on thought. I appreciate it, and thanks again.

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