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EDIT: I GOT IN! WOOT! I can't believe it!
Well, this is my first deviation ever! Hello Internet world!
This is my nobody submission for . Hopefully he gets passed through! And I apologize in advance for the lengthy amount of text… Credit goes to for helping me colour and finish parts of this!
EDIT: Tweaked stats and picture a little to make it hopefully more acceptable
Stats:
Nobody Name: Nojaxs
World: Snow White- Wicked Queen's castle
Age: Just turned 18 when heart was stolen
Element: Bonds (The relationship between 2 or more people, 2 or more objects, or people and objects)
How this works:
Nojaxs can alter the bond between two objects or people to change, strengthen, weaken, or unbalance (make a two-sided bond one-sided). Some example of this ability is changing a bond between friends to become a bond of rivals or strangers or enemies, or to change the bond to a favorite hat or flower from a bond of contentment to a bond of dissatisfaction, or even to change the bond between certain objects infused with power/emotion from a bond of support to a bond of incompatibility. He can also create bonds but they don’t last long unless supported. Nojaxs could break bonds completely but depending on the bond broken it could either exhaust him beyond reason (if the bond was naturally very strong) or not be worth breaking (if the bond was naturally very weak).
IMPORTANT: This element is not changing the feelings of his heart (aka. he is not making this person now love this person) but he is giving heavy psychological pressure to push the person to act in different ways (aka. If he makes the bond between two people to be lovers instead of friends, this causes them to feel like they SHOULD be touching each other intimately and feel like they SHOULD be feeling love for each other- which MIGHT push them to actually develop feelings for each other in that way). Basically it's making them look at that other person or object in a different light. The more he applies this psychological pressure of "bond shifting", the more the person, especially if they don't realize they're being affected, will view the other person or object in that way- which affects the intensity of the subsequent aftereffect of changing the past preconceptions or emotions that person holds towards that person or object. Also the bond can change back depending on how they react and interact and if one has a strong mind and heart, one would be able to "reason" and "feel" their way back to the original bond.
Further info:
-To affect a person's bonds Nojaxs must touch their flesh with his flesh (Ex. Bare hands touch)
-Once he does this Nojaxs can see all the bonds that a person has recently
-To create a bond he must touch all the objects/people he wants to bond, these create bond "ends"
-He must create a bond between an object/person within 30 min or the bond "end" will dissipate
-The time it takes to create a bond "end" is roughly equivalent to size- anything around his size takes 1 second to form a bond "end", anything twice his size takes 2 seconds, etc.
-All used objects automatically become objects infused with emotion or power of some sort, the level of which varies with amount of time and usage with the object
-He is able to affect the bonds between him and others also.
-Any bonds formed with him can be easily and instantly broken, and it is harder to bond those without hearts.
Weapon: Battle Belt (Datemaker)
-The Datemaker can act as a channel for his power. To actually wear it, he must loop it around his waist around 3 times although he often just buckles one loop and slings it around his shoulder. It is approximately his height in length. This is his main means of forcibly creating or imposing new bonds onto others.
Battle Strategy/attacks: Nojaxs is not very strong either physically or magically and has an average defence and health but has decent speed and health and has excellent accuracy. He generally prefers attacking people over time, changing their bonds slowly negatively until they become weak enough to be easily broken, either by him or by the person themselves. At this time he also creates and strengthens bonds between the person and him. When they realize they have no bonds left except for him, he breaks the bond and in their shocked, helpless state takes their heart.
If he is facing you directly and you know his power his main strategy is getting his hands or the belt on you, preferably on non-clothed spots, to change your bond. He’ll jump and dodge around you slashing at you from a distance with either end of the belt, and if he touches you either with a bare hand or the belt, he’ll form a bond end with that area. From there he’ll use:
(RC- Reaction Command)
First Crush: He creates a bond between a belt end and the area he touches; this'll cause you to subconsciously move that area closer to the belt. He then rushes in and, if you can't reason your way out (RC: reasoning), he'll deal massive unavoidable damage to that area. If you reason too soon, the bond ends, you block the preliminary hit and Nojaxs jumps back. If you reason just before he's about to hit you, you can dodge it and deal a powerful blow (RC: Good bye!).
Hand of Friendship: Creating a one-sided bond of friendship between you and him, he’ll cause you to feel hesitant about attacking him. He will then attack you with fierce slashes, culminating with forming a bond end at the end. However, if you keep reacting and defending against his attacks (RC: Reasoning) he’ll slip up when he tries to form the bond end and you dodge it, letting you get a key blow in. (RC: Good Bye!)
Discarded Treasure: He’ll lasso your weapon/important item using his belt and change the bond between you and it, generally to ones of hatred, disgust, or discontent. You’ll engage in a sort of tug-of-war where you’ll have to reason fast (RC: Reasoning) to prevent losing the weapon/important item. If you lose your weapon/important item, then Nojaxs pulls it away from you and keeps it near him until you beat him, making you unable to use it in that battle. If you are able to resist, you can pull him in after a few tugs and get a key blow in. (RC: Good Bye!)
Contract of Servitude: Lassoing your body, he creates a super-intense master-servant bond with you, making you unable to think anything but the thoughts of a slave. This disables you and slowly turns your heart weaker. You will have to reason quickly and for a long time (RC: Reasoning) to prevent being enslaved and even then it will seem hopeless unless you manage to find a hidden strength in you (RC: Heart’s Power). If you do not manage to either reason quick or long enough or do not find the hidden strength at the end, you become enslaved and you’re virtually dead. If you do manage to break free, the belt will be released and blown backward from your body and you will emit a strong light that damages Nojaxs and stuns him for a time. This is rarely used unless “Discarded Treasure” has just hit you but when his health becomes low, he’ll use this as a last resort.
History: His memory was blurred and damaged when his heart was stolen. He remembers that he was a servant in the wicked queen’s castle and that there was a significant boy and a significant girl in his life. He has shared a kiss with both boy and girl although one was accidental and ended in groans of disgust and one was intentional and ended in furious blushes from both. The trouble is, he can’t remember which reaction went with which person. His nobody tries to fulfill his longings for that remembered past emotion of love and to fill in the gaps in his memory by creating bonds with both genders, hoping as much as one without a heart can hope to be complete again.
Personality: Carefree and generally fun to be around he is always trying to make new “friends” and is usually found hanging out with one Nobody or another. He has an unfortunate love for dramatic poses and incorporates them everywhere in his daily life. He has an ironic naivety and sensitivity to even the slightest connotation of sex and blushes easily when it is mentioned or when he sees *ahem* romantically inclined activities more passionate then a kiss. Despite his seemingly jovial nature, Nojaxs is remorseless to all those who are not his friends and even to some of the people who are his friends and will calmly and systematically plan the destruction of the life of these people if ordered or angered.
Interesting Facts:
-He has a birthmark in the shape of a seashell somewhere on his lower body.
-He’s a sucker for happy endings and when not on a mission will try to encourage bonds that will lead to these, usually with disastrous and amusing results
-He cannot stand the colour neon yellow
-He has a fondness for animals that borders on obsession, no matter how vicious or dangerous it is. He would often bring home animals that he bonded with which were subsequently added to his now-shut-down miniature zoo.
-He will not let anyone mess up his hair for any reason. He spends at least a half hour every morning getting it perfect using the secret “Super Invincible Hair Gel” endorsed by Cloud. To mess up his hair is to bring future doom upon yourself.
Nojaxs © Me
Cloud, Kingdom Hearts © Square-Enix
Snow White © Disney
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Comments: 266
Your art was added to Org-Infinity, I've been looking through them lately and I just want to thank you for the fact that so far, your OC is the only one with a NORMAL Organization cloak.
I'm not saying I like your character [and don't take this the wrong way, a true artist takes comments like mine without arguing] but I do thank you for the NORMAL Organization cloak.
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Sorry this is an awesome nobody but could you help me make an Nobody
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Er, sure I suppose so. I'll help you as much as I am able if you like. Just a few questions:
- what exactly do you want me to help you with? (looks, element, abilities, attacks, strategies, personality, etc.)
- How much of your Nobody have you come up with already?
- Do you have a preview of your Nobody already?
- How did you hear of me?
That last one is sorta just for my curiosity's sake, cause I haven't been on Deviantart for a while and I haven't been on Organization Infinity for even longer.
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Question- what exactly do you want me to help you with? (looks, element, abilities, attacks, strategies, personality, etc.)
Answer- abilities, attacks, strategies,personality, his element is Ice and he has a blade called the Icecial
Q- How much of your Nobody have you come up with already?
A=Just Designs and The Blade but that's it
Q- Do you have a preview of your Nobody already?
A-I'm about to post His Character Page
Q- How did you hear of me?
A- I just looked up Custom Nobodies and i was fascinated by your stuff
I've got the story and everything else, I just need the stuff above
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I thank you for your compliment - I did work a lot on my character and his element since the club I was trying to join was very adamant in having someone with a unique element and everything. Anyways, on to helping you (I tend to ramble on, so the basic questions I need answered are on the top, while the explanations for the questions are further down):
1. From your designs, what is your Nobody's body type?
2. What are his Stats?
3. What is his battle range?
4. From his story, what type of person would you say he is? How would he react to a random situation?
Read the below descriptions if you like, or if you want to understand what I'm asking for in the questions. Get back to me as soon as you can, and I'll try to help.
The key to this is not me suggesting endless options that probably won't fit with your character or what you had in mind, but to help you expand your options or flesh out what you already have. As you have already developed some important aspects of your character, like story and character looks, it will be easy to do this. If you could send me a link or copy of your Nobody and his story, it would help me to understand what you want more.
First of all, what is your Nobody's body type? Is he fat? Skinny? Nerdy? Buff? Flamboyant?
Another essential question is, based on your Nobody's body type, what are his likely stats? Is he a musclehead that likes charging in head on with his massive muscles? Is he someone who developed extreme speed to offset the fact that he injures easily? Is it someone who stays in the background and attacks in subtle ways because he does not have the energy or the constitution for a head on battle? Is he someone with high/low Defense? Power? Technique? Speed? Accuracy? Intelligence?
Another question is his battle style. Is he short-range (like a martial artist?), mid-range (like a spear or whip master), or long-range (like an archer or mage)? As you have a blade, I would assume that it's likely short-range or mid-range rather then long-range but that depends on if your weapon is just a normal blade or a custom one (like an extendo-blade or a blade-gun or something).
From all these questions, based on your designs, you can get a sense of how he'll fight and the reason s why he fights the way he does. From this, you can get a sense of what type of strategies he'll use in battle, and from that, what aspects of the element of Ice he'll most likely use to develop his abilities and attacks.
However, another key component of strategy is his personality - it's not often that you have a musclehead be someone who attacks from far distance, or that you have someone with a harsh and dark childhood to try to have a fair and noble fight. From his backstory (his past, present environment, and reactions), you can get his personality. Is he shy? Outgoing? Gloomy? Cheerful? Evil? Good? Neutral? Sensitive? Apathetic? Expressive? Emotionless? Ruthless? Noble? Etc... If after you answer this, you feel your personality is unsatisfactory, or too simple or one-dimensional or something, I can help you flesh it out with things like odd contrasts/quirks, double-personalities, surface and deeper personalities, beliefs, etc...
Hope this'll help...
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He's Skinny
He is someone who developed extreme speed to offset the fact that he injures easily
He has high/Defense,Technique,Intelligence
and mid/Power, Speed, Accuracy,
he's mid-range
and he's ruthless
I can see what you mean
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Oh good then. Lesse...
Well from your response, I suppose your character's the type that likes to get up close and physical, but doesn't like getting hurt. A few standard strategies come to mind:
1. He fights like a normal swordsman, and uses his naturally strong Speed to blur past and around his opponent while weaving in blows. Often circles opponent from a safe distance to be able to dodge and yet rush easily. Uses Ice projectiles (Flying Ice Swords? Or Flying Ice Slashes?) to create openings in the opponent's defence at a mid-distance then, while they are distracted, move in quickly to finish them off with a few key sword strokes. (Perhaps sword has an Ice edge to it, so whenever it slashes or touches someone, they start freezing from that area - slows down that part of the body considerably, making the difference in Speed even greater) Not afraid to break down opponent's defense bit by bit, and often goes for several disabling blows (to neck, limbs, hips, hands, feet) to make sure they cannot resist when he goes in for the finish.
2. Stabs sword into ground and creates a thin layer of ice over the entire battle ground. Skates quickly over ice and around opponent while the opponent fumbles on the ice, skating in and around opponent quickly and attacking while the opponent's balance and guard is lowered. If opponent gets a hang of skating before he can finish them, a few consecutive Flying Ice Slashes at high speed from a safe distance should throw them off guard well enough for you to continue what you're doing.
3. Continuation of 2. - Create Ice Pillars to obstruct movement and vision of enemy by stabbing sword into ground as you skate. Ultimate ability? - Ice Warriors - Ice pillars burst to create Ice copies of your Nobody, who have roughly the same Speed (but not the Stamina/Power) as your Nobody. They all swarm around the opponent, distracting and attacking the opponent while you attack with more Ice projectiles from a distance and waiting until you can get a finishing move in.
Skills (You should probably re-name these - not good at names):
Frostbite - Gives sword an icy edge (as mentioned above) which freezes the part it cuts, numbing it and causing the part to slow down - extremities (aka limbs) freeze more easily because of less circulation then torso
Frost Slash - Chills air around sword to super low temperature and sends it flying towards the opponent (Can look like a standard Blizzard spell or like an Icicle in the shape of a sword or something)
Artic Field - Super chills ground water and water vapour above ground to form a solid slippery sheet of ice on the battle field
Speed Skate - Create frictionless Ice sheets on bottom of shoes to go extremely fast on ice - can increase friction/roughness of Ice at will to start and stop easily
Ice Pillar - Draws water deep underground from a sword stab to the ground to form an intimidating pillar to block attacks
Ice Doubles - Takes an insane amount of concentration and energy to create - Ice pillars burst to reveal rough look-alikes of your Nobody, they skate around the field causing havoc to whomever they encounter with their quick movements - made of Ice so shatter easily though
Personality:
Going to take a stab at this from what you've given me - He could be a very business-like person, who doesn't take things personally but calmly and methodically does what he is ordered to do, even if it is something horrifying like cold-blooded murder. A bit more of a thinker then a fighter, he takes time to note information about his target before fighting them to ensure the highest rate of success. Very concerned for his well-being, his battle-style reflects how he doesn't get close to others easily, yet goes for what he wants when he sees the opportunity, which may make him seem a bit ruthless and hard-hearted. Could possibly be a real softie when he's not doing work and spends his spare time creating interesting new sauce recipes and petting kittens. Or maybe not.
Some questions: How does he injure easily and yet have a High Defense? How does he have extreme speed and yet have only a Mid Speed? (Rethink your Stats 
How do you like it? Need any more help?
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the halloween exchange is taking them forever, so im just gonna let you know that i got you for the exchange, and here's your pic: [link]
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Hey congratulations on getting in! I know you help everyone else with elements and things so you really deserve it. I can't read your lengthy text right now (cannot find my damn spectacles!) but I love your element! Very original, but no more than I would expect from someone with such a fantastic imagination!
XX
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Thanks! I hope that you'll be accepted soon too!... unless you're already accepted and then I'll look forward to looking it up on the member list!
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When I manage to find an element I like, I'll let you know. It takes freaking forever! Plus I have to draw out some character sheet stuff first!
If I ever get in and manage to do the meme, I'll be sure to put you in the friends section! :]
x
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Why thank you!
Nojaxs: Welcome to be here! You are quite the dashing fellow... but might I ask why you have restraints on? They are really nice restraints, to be sure, but I was wondering if there was some sort of reason or story behind it?
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Xolu: Cheers mate^^ Oh well there's two reasons behind that:
First, My 'hands' often bug me so I like to keep 'em out the way when the're not in use.
Second, not to alarm you but I'm somwhat insan-KILL FOR DADDY EMERALD THEIVES!!! *eye twitch*.......Sorry what was I saying?
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Nojaxs: .... I believe you were talking about why you have restraints and...about your sanity? But what's a little insanity between friends right? But what's this about your hands bugging you?
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Xolu: Oh yeah, I tend to black out now and then. And about the hands... *manages to undo restraints and shows he was wheels for hands* And let me tell you it's HELL going to the bathroom.
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Nojaxs:.... 0_0.... I would imagine it would be. *examines wheel closely* If you don't mind me asking... how did you get these beauties? *mumbling* and... wonder.......... counts...... direct ......
P.S. ... represents missing words and grammar in the mumbling
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Xolu: Sadly when I first became a nobody. Great for battle but for everything else it's a bloody pain!
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Nojaxs: *laughs* Yeah, I'd expect you'd be awesome in battle! Can you spin your wheels when you want to or do you actually have to move them against something to get them to spin?
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Xolu: Thank you, they're automatic and I can realease the gas whenever, just as long as it's spinning though^^
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Nojaxs: Oh yeah! Your ability is Asphyxiation Gas right? *whistles* I wouldn't want to have to face you in battle, with your speed and your awesomely dangerous ability!
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Xolu: Why thank you. Your ability is really great too. All those colourful plastics.....mmmmm plastic....
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Nojaxs: Colourful plastics?! Where?! *looks around excitedly but suddenly stops* Wait.... Are they neon yellow?
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Xolu: Huh?.....*blinks then eye twitch*.....Sorry what was I saying?
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Nojaxs: I think something about plastic... I don't really remember clearly either. All I remember for the past minute is this haze of.... neon yellow *low growling sound from throat*. *snaps out of it* Well since we both can't remember what we were talking about, let's talk about something else! What things do you like to do?
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Xolu: Oh anything really, I have insomnia you see and find just about anthing amusing at night, like...watching paint peel.
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Nojaxs: Oh my, that sounds quite unfortunate... and I'm sure watching paint peel is very amusing but is there something in particular that you like to do at night that you could do with me?
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Xolu: Something with you? What did you have in mind dear dear boy?
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Nojaxs: Well it really depends on you. Are there any games in particular that you like to play? *poses pensively* Of course it'd have to be a game we could play inside or that's appropriate for night. *Poses even more pensively* But I'm pretty much up for any game! Do you have any particular suggestions?
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Xolu: Hmm, well I do like racing. I'm a pretty fast guy.
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Nojaxs: Well, although one of my strengths is my speed, I'm sure with those beauts on your hands and feet you'd run...er... wheel circles around me! I'd still love to try to race you though!
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Xolu: Well who knows, you might get lucky^^
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Nojaxs: That's true. Let's see just how lucky I get in the Night-time Racing Games! *Excited cheering pose* Now for the location... It would be nice to race around the organization castle but I feel that lots of people might get a little angry at two speed-happy friends running them over suddenly in the hallways
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Xolu: True true mate, so we just have to find somewhere where we won't bug people
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Nojaxs: Maybe one of the other worlds would do? Lots of them have interesting paths and obstacles to race through. *gets a slight worried look* But... will the superiors let us go to a world if we're just going to have fun? *Gets a pensive look* Or... does it really matter if they know or not?... Hmmm...
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Xolu: Ahh what they don't know won't hurt them, nothing wrong with a little fun mate. So where d'you fancy going?
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Nojaxs: Haha! Excellent! Perhaps a nice run through Traverse Town would be just the thing! But then again, Halloween Town would be quite interesting too... I dunno, where do you feel like going?
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Xolu: Hmmm, prehapes Halloween town would be more fun, don't you think?
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Nojaxs: Yes, and it has the perfect atmosphere for a midnight race! *appears pensive* Will there be any reward for the winner? Maybe doing something or owing a special favor or something for the winner- nothing that important would be on the line... Or should we play for just sport?
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Xolu: Hmmm, favours would be a good motivation, I wouldn't mind that at all^^
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Cryxat: Hiya bonding fellow, I'm Cryxat and congratz on gettin' in!
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Nojaxs: Heya your Oil-iness! I'm Nojaxs! It's so nice to meet you!
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Cryxat: Like wise! Ya got some freaky' bright hair. Ya sure yer not on fire cause ya look hot!
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Nojaxs: Oh snap! Well I hope we'll see each other more, 'cause all fires need a little oil to really heat things up!
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Cryxat: *smirks and laughs* Alright, next time I see ya, we'll turn it up like a basement boiler. Laterz!
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Welcome in!! 8DD Danm, when I read some stuff quickly I was think, my nobody would be a battery for this one. Her element is auras and that what nobodies have left that plus body and auras come from souls so its the most solid bond one could have. D8
I like you. 8D This element is really well though, congratz and he looks so mischievous it makes me giggles.
We should RP sometime. 8D
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Congratulations! Hope to see you in the chatroom! <3
Lexinoce: Ohmygosh, hi! *squeeky voice*
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Thanks! I don't know if I'll be in the chatroom much though... the last time I checked it out, I suddenly found myself discussing various brands of skittles...
Nojaxs: *squeeky voice* No way! It's you! Hiiiiiiiii!
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Hee-hee! That's funny.
Lexinoce: You've heard of me? *confused*
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Nojaxs: Well...no... not really. But perhaps we could remedy my lack of information by hanging out together more? You seem like a really exciting and energetic person! You're sure to be really fun to be around, I figure!
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