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shadowmega — Haunting Thoughts
Published: 2004-02-04 22:48:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 257; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 41
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These Haunting thoughtsPlaying with my mind
Rearranging what I believe
Making me into someone new
Craziness constantly increasing
Until I can take no more
When I run out of energy
I can no longer withhold them
These Haunting thoughts
Killing me from the inside out
Stabbing away at my brain
Like a troop of soldiers
Craziness constantly increasing
Until I can take no more
When I run out of energy
And release them to the world
These Haunting thoughts
Rampaging all throughout
Like they did once before
And led me to despair
Craziness constantly increasing
Until I can take no more
When I run out of energy
And tell them with care
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Comments: 12
love the use of repetition in your work...so many times it is used and fails to make an impact..but you do it well. keep it up.
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I agree with all of the above!!! It's REALLY good!! Aww...I love your poetry! ^_^
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I agree with herblueness. Really good job will. Deserve a +fav
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^^ i really like that. it kinda goes with how i've been feeling lately....nice job! ^^
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