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The wind was certainly ceruleanas it whisked up waves
and salted rims sprayed
trimmings of the Pacific along
my chin
At waterside one could reside;
abiding in a swelling mind
or fixed in intuition
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Fixed in intuition. Staring at the open sea and the world beyond the horizon, longing to see past the end of your eyesight and discover just how massive your world is.
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Precisely! It's humbling, empowering, grounding and motivating all at once <3
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And as you said, expansive.
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I do love this! It's amazing, and shows a great dexterity with imagery. thank you for sharing, as always.
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Quite wonderful, miss Mikaila.
Thank you for sharing it!
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The alliteration in this poem really struck me! Certainly an underrated literary device. Also, the word choice is very specific, which to me is incredibly important. Great work.
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I am going to see the Pacific in March and trust it will be as glorious as your words!
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Oh awesome!! It's beautiful, but Cali Pacific is different than it is up in the PNW. Whereabouts are you going to be?
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Northern Oregon! It should be grand.
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