HOME | DD
shadowsofthought — Do you?
Published: 2009-05-12 23:14:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1730; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
Redirect to original
Description
Do you remember when we first talked?That night that you first let me in?
When i told you i wouldn't walk
Away from anything
Do you remember how I told you you saved me?
By being there and holding me
And helping me to see?
Even as
I knew it wouldn't last
I was fooled into thinking
That it wouldn't pass
Your numbing serinity
Breathing me back only to leave
Why can I no longer see?
You held me for so long
That i forgot what it was like alone
It hurt like a blade
As you left and
Your love swayed
Like my feet trapped in sand
Please will you take my hand?
I swore to take you to a land
Where they wouldn't demand
But you took away your hand
Now it seems I can't stand
On my own again
Broken I crash
Through the glass
Onto the other side
And I have no pride
I sit here with the blade in my hand
It presses into my skin
Have I really forgotten this sin?
Who is there to stop me
Who is there to plead for me?
No I have to learn
The blade left my hand
And yet, I yearn
My own broken shards
Pricked me like barbs
So I walk on my pain
And start again
Related content
Comments: 12
I really really liked this. actually its sorta what i have been attempting to get across to my ex. though its not really his fault for leaving. He cant help how god made him. You wouldn't mind if i let him read this would you ?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
No though it was for an ex of mine i wouldn't mind you letting him read it and trust me i know how you feel. is it a recent thing?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well its a long story. we broke up over summer but its cause more or less he is gay. and he likes me best friend Cj. Its hard because i do love him and he still loves me. We just cant be together.I mean he loves Cj more now but if i go over to his house he still like to cuddle with me. And he never fails to tell me how much i mean to him. lol is all confusing. He moved out of state for a few month to get away from it all but he had to come back. he couln't stay away.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hmmmm, well there are odds he might be bi if he's still attracted to you, i mean i'm bi and it is an actual thing alot of people in both communities try to say 'oh you cain't possibly be bi, you're either one or the other' and thats not true.
I do warn you if you show him this, he may take it the wrong way, and if you truly love him you might want to be able to say ok go ahead because if you push someone hard enough they will break.
but do what you think is best with this situation
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well he says he is bi. But i am the only girl he has been with. The first and only. And i am not really pushing anything. I give him a lot of space actually. Ive tried to distance myself from him for my own benefit but he got sad and said he needed me. :/ so now i am putting effort into being there when he needs me and being a good friend first and for most.He just came out a few months ago so as i am sure you know he is having a hard time.And i am the only person he thinks understands him. Because he says i know him the best. I don't know. Maybe i am going about it the wrong way. What do you think?:/
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It sounds like your doing your best, and trust me it's going to hurt like a bitch because of the fact that you never will know until something happens, like me I was in love with the girl, i have almost been broken up with her for a year now and i see that whilst yes there were parts of me that loved her no i wasn't in love with her i met a wonderful girl a little while back on here and we're working things out so that we can be together, it's tough as hell when things come to love you know? All i can tell you is be there for him but don't make yourself too available just make yourself there for him as a friend because if you try too much you will end up..exhausted
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yeah i know what you mean. And yeah i will try that. Thanks for the advise. ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I really liked this, one stanza confused me with all the same rhyme (the one with the hand, land, demand, and hand) but in all it's great
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I swore to take you to another land
Where they wouldn't demand but you took away your hand
The meaning is that at the time we had met one of my exes she had been in an abusive home, i had made a promise to her to give her a different life than the pain she had been receiving but in the end she decided to go with another guy
so i made a promise
she rebuked it taking away her hand and at the time of writing this i had actually wanted her back...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
No, I understood it. I'm just saying, at first read, it was a bit confusing. I knew what you meant.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
awesome expression..you gots some great writing..you shoud submit to group #satan rides the media..its a new group and i think your writing would be awesome in the group journal..i write a little in the journal..you can see some of my writings there..hope ya join..peace-out man!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0