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shadowsofthought — Eternal Questions
Published: 2010-02-23 12:41:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 263; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description So how are things in heaven?
I sit and ask as the clock goes past eleven
You seemed so driven

Only for your life to be brought to an abrupt end
As your god does tend
Death he sends

Is heaven all you thought it would be?
Or is it hell you see?

Because here on earth
It seems scorched
Me and dad were driven out of the church

Dream of you I still do
So many questions to which answers are long past due

I don't mean to keep you
I know you have that golden hue
To get to

But I want to ask again
How are things in heaven?
were they worth your painful end?
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Comments: 6

Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 09:31:57 +0000 UTC]

i 2 would be asking this question of someone i loved

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cowgirlupbud [2010-02-23 21:44:04 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful. you have my condolances as well.

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shadowsofthought In reply to cowgirlupbud [2010-02-23 21:44:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Manipulated-Minds [2010-02-23 13:05:05 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad. You have my condolences. Excellent poem.

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shadowsofthought In reply to Manipulated-Minds [2010-02-23 21:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, in truth i happen to think she is in her heaven but then again i think heaven is what you want it to be..

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Manipulated-Minds In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-02-23 21:26:01 +0000 UTC]

That is a good way to think

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