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shadowsofthought — Evolution Found Peace
Published: 2009-05-14 16:59:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Lost my brothersBrought about in darkness my brothers
Seeking to speak to the deities that ridcule
And yet i am a fool
Is love evol or the evolution of the
Peace thought to us
That we had lost
Broken
Chosen
What difference are these words
Amongst those holy frozen
Pain
A fickle thing
That defines
Us for our lives
Ponder the days
When i soaked in holy rays
And yet i seek not to return
I have no yearning
For i know where my soul is learning
Broken of spirit
Waiting
Chasing
Left raving
For the one who stole my heart
And made me weak
But oh no don't think
That i want it back
For i have given it to chosen
Even if she won't speak it
I know where i leave it
And I don't want to take it
For in my eyes
This is where it rests
And I have given my last test
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Comments: 8
"Is love evol or the evolution of the"
What is "evol"? Evil maybe? I could be wrong and could be intended to not be a whole word or something.
Choosen should be chosen.
Other than minor spelling issues. I like this one.
A little disjointed, but it kind of works with the style.
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and i fixed it
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"For i have given it to choosen"
One more.
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thank you heh one sec and i'll fix
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yes Evol is spelled correct
Evol = Love it is supposed to be a play on it it is supposed to be Evil spelled backwards with an o instead of an L because it is Love spelled backwards
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Ah... Got it.
I kinda suspected you were trying for something like that there, but I wasn't sure.
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love evol evolution know it you love this is really wonderful
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