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Published: 2010-02-20 08:17:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 95; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Your heartbeatHe hears it
And your sweat
He demands it
Dripping down your spine
You are running out of time
Least be it for you that you have commited
Your unholiest of crimes
For you my dear
Have reason to fear
His visit to your grave
And him making you his slave
Dripping blood he smells the scent
Of what crime you have commit
He sees the blood on your hand
Here he asks you for your darkest hand
Driven to his madness
He will take you in his sadness
For what you do not know
Is he is searching for your soul
Damned me we are
But we knew that which we swore
Because in truth the pain we feel
Is worth bearing his scar
For if you were to glance at us
You would not see the foam and puss
You would not see the darkness that
Is a part of us
For that is what we sell you
In our skin tight tombs
All your pleasures
And your sins
Only to let our hell begin
Comments: 4
thedaemonspawn [2010-03-02 02:55:53 +0000 UTC]
Man, have you got a gift with words! I really love the wrenching sickness and daunting of this. Spoken out loud, it'd flow off the tongue beautifully. Excellent piece.
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thedaemonspawn In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-02 04:18:11 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome!
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Bait-n-switch [2010-02-20 12:22:56 +0000 UTC]
thanks for sharing ..i really enjoyed it a tastytwisted gem!!very mystereous heart wrenching down word spiral tempo..each line brought more peril in its unravelling..in my mind..the ending brought a sense of release..
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