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shadowsofthought — Hidden Scars
Published: 2010-03-15 04:07:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 391; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 6
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Hidden secrets,Hidden tears,
Hidden rips,
Hidden fear.
What you see is tears
Stained on my cheek
From the years you left me Weak
Dripping to the floor
Making you think you scored
Making me feel nothing but scorn
Where was my heart worn?
Drifting pain
Left me torn
My love in slain
I walk on eggshells
Unable to deal
With this constant pressure
You made me feel
You said "I'll be here"
That I had nothing to fear
When you left out the rear
Doors open
That you close
Wounds are your trophies
That you hold close
But you see
I'm smiling in glee
Cause now i am not that fissure
You left
Now I am me!
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Comments: 8
...THIS IS AMAZING...
*sobbing*
I can relate to this
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I think of one word when I read this:
FREEDOM!!!!
There's nothing wrong with my evil laugh!!!! Muahahahahaaa!!!
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Emphasis on the word, I know it breaks form somewhat but i felt it necessary. But glad you asked!
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Sadly, I am too tired to critique. I guess that's what depression is.. But anyways, it's a lot better. And I see you took my advice. Good job and the punctuation stuff helped ^^
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hehe maybe later 
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haah yeah very true :]
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