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shadowsofthought — Patient 285 [NSFW]
Published: 2010-03-06 06:02:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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Description They carried me on a dolly in much the fashion of Hannibal Lector in Silence of the Lambs, except I had no Clarice I heard Dr. B. Liggerant talking to Dr. Daemon the little snatches I could hear:
"Patient suffered a mental break two years ago, has been mine for four, has been doped, drugged and even roleplaying simula-" that was Dr Liggerant, I knew his docile tone, kind man really but he didn't understand what I was; nobody could
"I don't care about what you've been doing in your soft hands" Dr. Daemon, her voice sounded on edge as if she might belong in the asylum rather than in charge of it "What, is your diagnosis and why are you sending him here?"
Dr. B flipped through something, I knew in my mind it was paper but I saw blades and I heard the voices saying
Going to cut you!
Going to eat you!
I was struggling to escape when Dr Daemon plunged the sweet nectar of sedatives in my neck I blacked out.

When I woke up again, I was in a room but I couldn't call it a room, the room seemed to bleed and had a thousand crosses on the wall I tried to touch one but fell right through it, onto the floor. I got up again just in time to see a ghostly apparition, "fuck what is this place?!"
There was a knock on the door "It's your room 285 enjoy it"
Somehow I think I wouldn't be
I sat in the corner in a bloodstain that I saw. Good god this wasn't the way I wanted it to end. Or at least I hoped it wouldn't end this way
A voice giggled in my head "Of course it will Sillly!"
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Comments: 17

Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 07:40:38 +0000 UTC]


i want to know more about your room
i hope they help

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shadowsofthought In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 07:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Boy with all the curiousity about my room I think i'm actually going to have to write a story.....

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Gemmfyre666 In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 07:50:37 +0000 UTC]

thats what i'm doing

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shadowsofthought In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 07:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Well i'll definitely have to work on that. I'll probably have to start from the begining which technically could fit into other stories i've written i don't know what it is about me but alot of my characters end up being a little damaged

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Gemmfyre666 In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 08:00:47 +0000 UTC]

yes you will
so do mine so i wouldn't worry about it

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shadowsofthought In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 08:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Go and read the story on my profile called Elijah's Fault hang on i got a link around here somewhere ah here ya go [link] Patient 285 could very well be him

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Gemmfyre666 In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 08:13:00 +0000 UTC]

ok yeah ya could use him but you need to add abit more to it
like how you react to the other patients in the Asylum

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shadowsofthought In reply to Gemmfyre666 [2010-03-06 08:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh no i won't use him Maybe a basis of his back story you know start it from scratch and work my way through Dr B Liggerant's roleplays all the way up to the good Doc Deamon

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Gemmfyre666 In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 09:00:27 +0000 UTC]

sounds great
now get started

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RingtailFox [2010-03-06 06:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Awesomenessssssssssssssssssssssss...

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shadowsofthought In reply to RingtailFox [2010-03-06 06:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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RingtailFox In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 06:43:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcomeness.

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thedaemonspawn [2010-03-06 06:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I love the scene you've painted in my mind with your words! It's such a brief glimpse into your world, your room, how you came to be thrust into the situation. It ends so abruptly, leaving me with a thirst for more.

Awesome depiction of your room!

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shadowsofthought In reply to thedaemonspawn [2010-03-06 06:42:07 +0000 UTC]

*twitch twitch* ok minor edit to be made though..need meds again Doc

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Lady-Rorschach [2010-03-06 06:07:38 +0000 UTC]

Really good.

You can put Shutter Island down now.

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shadowsofthought In reply to Lady-Rorschach [2010-03-06 06:10:58 +0000 UTC]

NO! Not gonna! presses against bars you're like a rat in a maze

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Lady-Rorschach In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-06 06:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I know. Been in a psyh ward before. Not fun.

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