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shadowsofthought — Sinners to Cinders
Published: 2010-03-03 04:01:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 258; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 16
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Description Unity
Is in the words we speak
In what we want to keep
But What we don't want to see

In our skies
And above our eyes
You can see many lies
Creeping like little flies

You bring what you want
YOu burn what yous shun
But the deception has only begun

Is it your word
That leads the herd
Or you that is the herded
Slept in gutters
With open shutters

You seek with your mind
But not your spirit blind
As you say "I"ll take what i can find"

But unknown to you the medication
Is posioning your dedication
To your own clarification

Burnt to cinders
Ash we give the tenders
Oh look what our "unity" given

Don't you think it's time
That you sat and listen to your own rhyme
Instead of wasting it on spiritual crime?
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Comments: 5

VBAadmin [2010-03-03 04:06:11 +0000 UTC]

That was... quick.

Just as a tip, rhymes usually only fit silly or childish themes, and it seems that this tries to convey a more serious tone. Usually, but not always.

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shadowsofthought In reply to VBAadmin [2010-03-03 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

i didn't mean for it to come off rhyming....I've had a rhythm in my head all day.....then again i've been writing all day so i'm a lil crazy? And when i've got an idea stuck in my head it tends to come out fast

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Lady-Rorschach In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-03 06:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Crazy you say? I was crazy once. They put me in a padded cell. Then the worms came. I hate them, they drive me crazy. Crazy, you say? I was crazy once...

(I've been listening to the Shutter Island soundtrack again...)

I didn't get "Political statement" out of it. Unless by "Political Statement" you mean religious zealots who mix politics and religion.

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shadowsofthought In reply to Lady-Rorschach [2010-03-03 06:42:59 +0000 UTC]

I think you need your dr andover fix....seriously

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Lady-Rorschach In reply to shadowsofthought [2010-03-03 06:53:52 +0000 UTC]

*Get sedated by Doc Andover and dragged off for experimentation* No...touchie, Doc...Zzzzz...

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