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Hey look! I actually did this! I'm pretty amazed, myself. (WOW, and it's not even 1PM! DANG, I'm quick!)

BUT ANYWAY. I think the most important thing is that the character seems grounded. Before it looked like it was floating [not jumping; floating] (and if it was SUPPOSED to be floating in the air for whatever reason then my whole redline is irrelevant. *shrug* OHWAIT, and if it's jumping then the biggest thing is that it should probably have it's body tilted more upward, like it's STARTING to jump instead of landing. And the back legs should be behind it more. I think this whole redline was probably super un-useful, wasn't it?) so it was hard to tell what was going on. (obviously)
BUT YEAH. I hope this helps. (I bet it doesn't. Ohwell. I'm still uploading it. Maybe I'll redline it again... Nah, probably not. Maybe I will tomorrow, though.... Nah.)
((I BLAME YOU FOR ANY MISTAKE ON MY PART.))
(((I dunno man, you should just look a a ref or something next time. I suck at this.)))
((((If you WERE looking at a ref then I'm even worse.))))
(((((This is getting ridiculous. Why am I still typing? And what's the point of all these parenthases? I need more coffee or something.)))))

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Hey look! I actually did this! I'm pretty amazed, myself. (WOW, and it's not even 1PM! DANG, I'm quick!)

BUT ANYWAY. I think the most important thing is that the character seems grounded. Before it looked like it was floating [not jumping; floating] (and if it was SUPPOSED to be floating in the air for whatever reason then my whole redline is irrelevant. *shrug* OHWAIT, and if it's jumping then the biggest thing is that it should probably have it's body tilted more upward, like it's STARTING to jump instead of landing. And the back legs should be behind it more. I think this whole redline was probably super un-useful, wasn't it?) so it was hard to tell what was going on. (obviously)
BUT YEAH. I hope this helps. (I bet it doesn't. Ohwell. I'm still uploading it. Maybe I'll redline it again... Nah, probably not. Maybe I will tomorrow, though.... Nah.)
((I BLAME YOU FOR ANY MISTAKE ON MY PART.))
(((I dunno man, you should just look a a ref or something next time. I suck at this.)))
((((If you WERE looking at a ref then I'm even worse.))))
(((((This is getting ridiculous. Why am I still typing? And what's the point of all these parenthases? I need more coffee or something.)))))

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