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I think this is my favourite piece of artwork I've made so far!I'd love some feedback; let me know wat I can improve on!
Please and thank you
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Comments: 11
swooniemoonie [2012-03-30 18:14:43 +0000 UTC]
It's gorgeous~!
Maybe you could make the body larger or the head smaller though. Do you do a 'skeletal' sketch?
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Sharpflake In reply to swooniemoonie [2012-04-01 13:45:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
I know, I didn't do one because I originally did it on paper, and it was only meant to be a 10 minute sketch, but I decided to do it anyway and realized how horrible the body proportions were AFTER I was finished.
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swooniemoonie In reply to Sharpflake [2012-04-01 15:52:26 +0000 UTC]
Of course~!
I hate when that happens! It's like when you spend 20 minutes on a pencil sketch and all of a sudden you get an eraser smudge. x.x
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Sharpflake In reply to swooniemoonie [2012-04-02 18:05:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes I hate that! Or when you wear new nail polish, and when you accidentally run your finger over the paper, a big streak of whatever colour goes right across the drawing. D:
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swooniemoonie In reply to Sharpflake [2012-04-03 16:41:37 +0000 UTC]
That makes me go on a Tori RAGE dude! It's all like, "WHY???"
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Sharpflake In reply to swooniemoonie [2012-04-07 15:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Exactly! I thought I was the only one haha.
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MeM0w [2012-03-17 20:34:57 +0000 UTC]
awe it's cute (:
the body is very small though o.O try to measure the head length and use that to calculate how long the torso should be (:
other than that, it is adorable.
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Sharpflake In reply to MeM0w [2012-03-17 20:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm pretty bad with body proportions and hands, so I'll try to work on that. ;D
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MeM0w In reply to Sharpflake [2012-03-17 20:48:12 +0000 UTC]
me too o: i watched a few videos on learning and now they are the same size as the head haha. well my suggestion is draw the head and the body, then the clothes and finally facial features, it helps get everything in place perfectly o:
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Sharpflake In reply to MeM0w [2012-03-18 17:40:09 +0000 UTC]
I use like a bunch of lines to get mine to look the way I want, but for this one I just sketched it out cause I was having an artists block the day I started it. Cx
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