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ShellMinded — Lightyears Away
Published: 2009-09-25 01:06:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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dear m,like a ship lost at sea,
i was drowning under the swells
you lifted me up
and now the sea of my heart is never smooth
under the alabaster moon of your love.
now you are the sun in the blue sky we lay beneath
among the golden grasses
you are the morning star
in my night sky,
beloved of my heart,
your eyes shining like they would brim over with tears
like the water you pulled me from.
i was a ship lost at sea until i found you.
thusly, when you held me
i accidentally fell in love
with the idea of you,
my day everlasting.
now, with miles between us, seconds, lightyears
i find myself preoccupied
with the memories i hold dear
of my time
among the golden grasses,
under the morning star.
love,
your c
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"dear M" lol i love reading it out lound w/exspertion!!!
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hehehehe silly! now i can't look at that poem the same way!
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you ruined it!!!!! noooo!
jk
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Very good, the repetition of "among the golden grasses" works really well
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thanks! 
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interesting. 
"like th water you pulled me from."
...did you meant the?
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oh oops! i'm gonna go fix it. dammit i can't type >_<
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did you see my other poem?
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um...they were both good from what i remember.
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