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the sun beat downmaking my hair shine like gold
while sweat glittered on our skin
every time we touched
it was like an electric shock
i could almost feel my hair stand on end
your voice, raw in my ear
husky and low
whispering to me
every time your hand brushed mine
my nerves were on fire
i could feel my temperature rise
your body glowed in the water
as you slipped past me in the pool
i felt the electric current flow through me
when your skin slid next to mine
i could hear the ocean roar
as you held me in your arms
the heat
the emotions running high
we were higher than the clouds
riding on cloud nine
swept on the warm wind
and breathing in the dark
as your bare arm rested against mine
i felt it in the air
the heat
the emotions running high
i could feel
the sexy airs of summer
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Comments: 4
orphicfiddler [2008-05-17 21:25:27 +0000 UTC]
Mmm...summer... I'm catching a definite trend with titles on your most recent submissions.
I do know the feeling... Little shocks. Lovely.
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ShellMinded In reply to orphicfiddler [2008-05-17 21:27:10 +0000 UTC]
as you can see, i can't wait for summer!!!! thanks
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AckBo [2008-05-10 22:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem...
I enjoy reading about the sensations of Women as they interact with Men!!!
It has always been a mystery to me what the female experiences during those tender moments...
Of course I know that most chicks are on the "Dreamy" side concerning Love and Sex but that's kind of generalizing things...Women remain an Enigma to most guys!!!
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ShellMinded In reply to AckBo [2008-05-11 03:18:51 +0000 UTC]
oh these weren't just tender moments but they were included.
i'm not mostly not on the 'dreamy' side, only a little.
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