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With all the chances that I getI feel like a marionette
I feel like a bird underground
Unable to flap my wings around
I look at the state I'm in
I realize how incapable I've been
I don't deserve all you give me
I just wish that you could see
Just like a key that can't be found
Or listening to the same old sound
I look at the state I'm in
I realize how shallow I've been
Every time I hear your name
I just never feel the same
Like a fish left out of water
Or a pig led to the slaughter
I look at the state I'm in
I realize sad my life is
All at once it came to me
I don't know what I want to be
Just like a rose that just died
Or grief that has been cried
I look at the state I'm in
I realize I did what I did
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Comments: 16
orphicfiddler [2008-04-30 06:44:54 +0000 UTC]
Realistic little poem you got there. I'm sure many could relate.
Though, considering how happily in love you seem to be, the last two poems you've written seem kind of ironic... (I'm glad. So many people I know are having a wretched time with relationships. I always feel a little guilty that I've found my forever-guy and they haven't. Nice to know there's others who are also content. ^_^)
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ShellMinded In reply to orphicfiddler [2008-04-30 15:15:21 +0000 UTC]
thanks! i like it when ppl can relate to my poems.
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AckBo [2008-04-30 00:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Very strange, PW...strange indeed!!!
Is dat-half-breed your main squeeze???
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AckBo In reply to ShellMinded [2008-04-30 00:33:57 +0000 UTC]
Thought that he was Justin.........
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ShellMinded In reply to AckBo [2008-04-30 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]
pfft nope. justin's wif me in my avvie!
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ShellMinded In reply to AckBo [2008-04-30 00:40:01 +0000 UTC]
oh HECK NO!!! i'm as white as i can get!
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AckBo In reply to ShellMinded [2008-04-30 13:06:34 +0000 UTC]
I live next to Asbury Park...there are real Gangsta's there...G's that shoot, rob, pimp and terrorize the residents...I'll try and get some photos of them without getting shot or stomped myself!!!
I know a few of them...they laugh at all the white kids that emulate them...kids get beat up or shot for bringing books from school...some parents buy their kids two sets of books, one for school and one for home...people get home by sundown because they are afraid to be outside in the dark...they are "LEGEND"...kids glorify this lifestyle but in reality it's a very serious problem in the communities where it occurs!!!
There are places in Asbury that a non-Gangsta' had better not go...
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ShellMinded In reply to AckBo [2008-04-30 15:20:01 +0000 UTC]
we have that part of town too. i am safe because 1) my gangsta friend keeps me safe cuz they're all scared of him, 2) i am not a wanna-be gangsta.
so i know about all that. my old school was gangsta central in my city. NOT good to be white and outgoing there.
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AckBo In reply to ShellMinded [2008-04-30 17:06:26 +0000 UTC]
Gotcha'......Glad you're smart about it all....Stay safe, Dudette!!!!
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AckBo In reply to ShellMinded [2008-04-30 23:02:13 +0000 UTC]
That's why you're The Fearless Leader...
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