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Published: 2009-10-12 21:50:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Secrets locked between blue linesWhat do you
See in her eyes
That you cannot find in mine
Echoes
Of old laughter
Gathering no more
Than dust and mildew
I'd expose anything you want
Between veins
And older sorrows
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the word spill does feel a little overused. but i can't for the life of me think of a different word though i have a feeling of the right onee. bahh. and i like the initial image.
reminds me of looseleaf paper "between blue lines"
made me think of love notes i'd pass in class all the timeee on looseleaff..
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Changed it to "Iād expose anything you want" from "I'll spill out anything you wanted to hear."
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Actually I think spill is a fine word to use there. I don't think the teacher got it... Nice work baby
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lmao she definitely did NOT.
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I thought not LOL
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