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Description Nick's breath hitched for a third time as he finally ran his fingers over the wound in his abdomen. The air was coming to him in short gasps as it was, but now his eyes were hazed with water - the world was swimming around him. He could still hear the hoard attacking his 'teammates', his fellow survivors... His friends. Yeah, it had taken him a very long time to think of them that way... But especially when it came to Ellis. More than anything when it came to Ellis.
His legs gave way, but the pain barely registered as they scraped against the gravel beneath him. His abdomen was the next thing to give up supporting, and he toppled over onto his side, face hitting the sidewalk wetly as he sprawled in the blood of the Hunter that had finally gotten the better of him. In fact they were facing each other now, eyes on and dear lord he felt sick. His fingers were drenched in red, and he couldn't bear to look down at the thing because sweet lord the pain was so bad.

Where was Lady Luck now?

Sound seemed to be numbing out, like some great noise had deafened him... Or maybe he really was underwater now. That was a nice thought... There was something so soothing about water. Nick closed his eyes for just a moment, and he was sinking slowly into a peacefully dark abyss, beneath the waves, beneath the ruckus of the storm on the surface. Maybe there would be fishing boats being tossed around up there, people dying, but that was irrelevant because he was so far from the air there was no point trying to even breathe. Just a moment more in this water, that was all that he could think. One more moment of peace.

A hand grabbing at his shirt brought him back, but the sound was still barely there. Still through a thick wall of water, that he was hurriedly blinking away.
Ellis came into focus, eyes wild and blazing, the way his mouth was moving - he had to be shouting... Desperately screaming. Was it at him? Maybe he was in trouble..... His head was so fucking heavy, he could barely move it to look around - the infected seemed to have dispersed by now. Rochelle and Coach, had they gone too?

"Nick! Nick would ya listen to me? Yer gonna be okay, ya hear me?! Don't you dare try slipping away now. You ain't taught me how ta play poker yet! Remember?" It was still fuzzy. Old radio fuzzy. But Nick's eyes were fixed on Ellis' face as he risked speaking - maybe the water wouldn't flood his lungs too quickly.
"Hey.... Ellis..." It was so strained, did he normally sound like this? No, it had to be the pain, the pain that he simply couldn't express
"Shut up contest... Sound good to you?....... Three two one, remember?" He gasped and his hands flew towards the open pool of blood as a jolt of agony shot through his very existence.
"Fuckin' hell! Now ain't the time ya idiot! Coach and Ro have gone to try and find a medi-kit, none of urs has got one y'see." The water was making it hard to see again, tears leaking gently away from him despite the fact that the pain was dulling. He could feel the heat of crimson spreading out across his shirt, dripping into a great pool on the floor.

The air was escaping him, and breathing was becoming so much harder... He could practically feel his lungs giving up.
"Hey.... Ellis......."
But the redhead was stood away from him, jumping up with rage blazened across his face, shotgun in hand and teeth bared like some wild pack animal. Of course, the infected. There was no way taht they would stay away from such a strong scent of blood... But there was no way Overalls would be able to protect them both alone, he needed just another moment before he drowned. Just another moment before that bliss.
"Champ!... I need to tell you... Something..."
"Not now Nick! You can tell me once you're patched up! I'm kinda busy!" The gunshots rang crystal clear, reverberating around his skull - it seemed that at least now the sound was regular again.

It took all the energy that he had to prop himself onto one elbow and drag his rifle from the floor beside him. The clouds overhead were looming, and with a low rumble a torrent of rain began to cascade over the pair. Swinging the heavy weapon with one arm, plus steadying and aiming in the same fashion, was more difficult than he had ever imagined; sweet god the water was claiming him now. It was all that he could do to removed Ellis from the danger of the monsters that loomed behind him, collapsing back with some of his final breaths escaping from parted lips.

"Kiddo.... please....." He had never sounded so desperate, never felt so desperate, never needed to speak more than he did right at that moment. He could feel his pulse ringing through his fingertips - what a strange place to feel it. But there wasn't so much to feel anymore.... It was definitely getting slower, getting weaker, or maybe just getting further away. Maybe a part of him had already returned to the sea, and it was waiting to be completed.
"NO! YER GUNNA BE FINE!"
Ellis really could be stubborn sometimes.....

"Ellis....." The sound, it was leaving him again, all muted and feathery and white. Would sound be white though? Typical, the last time his head was gonna be straight and he was questioning such trivial shit. "Ellis... I need you to know.... The stuff I said, I never meant it."
"I know that you didn't Nick! I know you didn't okay?" The boy turned back to him and the tears covering him were so innocent that Nick could hardly stand it.
He didn't deserve tears like that. He didn't deserve anything as pure as that, he never ever had... And now he would never have the chance to deserve them again. It looked like he'd been riding the lucky road for far too long.

"Ellis........." The mechanic was knelt beside him now, fingering the tear in his shirt with such an urgent fear one would think the injuries were the other way around. Breathing... He needed to keep breathing, he had to tell him.
"Ellis... I.... I ..." Why the hell wouldn't the words come out now? One more shot ma'am... one more sliver of luck, just enough to bless his thought into meaning. He needed to...... Needed..... Words...... And.....
Keeping his eyes open was such a drain.... He had no choice but to let them fall shut as the cotton-wool noises grew even further away. The water.... It was real now too. He could feel the rain hammering against him, feel the pools slipping between his fingertips, this water wasn't the water that he had before. He wanted that water back... But not until.....

"Ellis dammit I lo-"..... No time for more breathing. He would drown. A final breath, one too weak to finish his sentiment, passed through him. The tears falling onto his face weren't his own, alien water wetting his lips as he felt his hair being pushed from his face.

It was the last thing that Nicolas ever knew... The feeling of a warm cap being pushed over his scalp, resting on his head like a trophy. And the final sound, hot breathy words up against his ear, choked from sobbing
"I... I love you too Nick... Yer mah best buddeh..... Way better than Keith....... But if ya see 'im, duhn tell 'im ah said tha'"

And Nick was plunging into the wet, the dark... The peace surrounded him and pulled him away. The last thing that the gambler could think was; I didn't mean it in a friendship sense, Champ.
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Comments: 81

LeonSKenne [2017-03-11 04:53:14 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO Im Saddddd why Nick is dead? Nellis!!!!

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Shady-Ken [2013-12-31 06:59:37 +0000 UTC]

If I could animate, boy would this go far.

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Fallenpeach [2013-05-05 06:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful.. the way you explained how Nick felt when he was drifting away.. it just felt so real, with the water and the quiet muted noise. I can just imagine how it feels, really.. It must of felt horrible for him This made me cry so hard.. And as soon as I read the last sentence I sobbed.

Very heartbreaking and beautifully written..

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Vencentio [2012-08-25 04:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Ohofdicfvhxh
this is
amazing.

Actually crying. Just.
nnn ;;

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Vencentio [2012-08-31 21:30:48 +0000 UTC]

ALSKFN
WAT.
Are you serious? ;___;
Oh my goodness thank you so much.
I, uh, did you seriously cry? Sorry, I get excited by people enjoying my writing xD

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Vencentio In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-08-31 23:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes.
It's beautiful but sfhdkjxch so sad. ;u;

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Vencentio [2012-08-31 23:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Well I guess it IS meant to be sad XD
Can I say I love your icon by the way? Reminds me of Renard Queenston 8D
Uh, if you know him, which maybe you probably do not...

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Vencentio In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-08-31 23:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and yes I do know Renard Queenston! 8D

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Vencentio [2012-09-01 11:54:47 +0000 UTC]

ASKFJ Yeey 8'D I love a lot of his music, his Kitsune^2 stuff is probably my favourite

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Vencentio In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-09-01 16:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Ohgod yeah, Kitsune^2 is awesome. ;u;
All of his music is amazing.

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hellhound249 [2012-07-10 21:13:59 +0000 UTC]

tears rolling down my face! Loved it

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to hellhound249 [2012-07-12 20:02:01 +0000 UTC]

AOSIKFNMLASF. Thank you very much ;_;

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Themonsterinsideme [2012-06-11 02:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Dammit, you made me cry for real D:

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Themonsterinsideme [2012-06-11 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]

D8
Aw man, I'm so sorry!
XDD
Though I suppose I'm quietly glad my writing could do that?

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Themonsterinsideme In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-06-12 08:20:34 +0000 UTC]

I know you're saying to the others that it means well to you since you want to become an author. ^-^ Well then, I am not ashamed to say that I cried a BUNCH in this o.o

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ThisIsMyGame200 [2012-03-18 16:06:03 +0000 UTC]

WAAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! WHY DOES NICK ALWAYS HAVE TO DIE?!?

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to ThisIsMyGame200 [2012-03-18 17:32:06 +0000 UTC]

EVERY TIME
ALWAYS.
A NEVER ENDING CIRCLE OF DEATH AND DESPAIR. D8<

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ThisIsMyGame200 In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-03-18 17:33:30 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW!

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jeffcena619 [2012-01-30 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]

I almost cried! ;n; But I love it..
I need more! Keep writing, Champ.

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to jeffcena619 [2012-01-30 19:00:16 +0000 UTC]

HERRNERRMERR ;////;
M-more? XD

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jeffcena619 In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-01-30 20:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, more. ^-^
Un-unless that's too much to ask.. o////o

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to jeffcena619 [2012-01-30 21:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Ono
more of this? I just have no idea what to write XDD

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jeffcena619 In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-01-30 22:03:27 +0000 UTC]

You will find something. Inspiration has no limits .w.
But, I would love to do a col-lab with you..
Even though it would be really creepy xD

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to jeffcena619 [2012-01-30 23:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Like a writing collab? *curious*

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jeffcena619 In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2012-01-30 23:31:14 +0000 UTC]

Mhmm ^-^

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Swayayso [2011-11-13 08:16:25 +0000 UTC]

T.T I loves it so much! I cried at the end, I am such a baby!

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Swayayso [2011-11-13 16:29:53 +0000 UTC]

;////;
S-seriously? I'm flattered! I GOTS EMOTION DOWNNNNN

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Swayayso In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2011-11-13 16:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it was so amazing. You are one damn good writer!

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Swayayso [2011-11-13 21:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahh t-thank you... I'm planning on doing a degree in Creative Writing so that really means SO SO much to me ; A ;

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Swayayso In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2011-11-15 00:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Creative writing, sounds like your kind of thing. I don't know if you plan on doing it soon, but good luck anyways!

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Swayayso [2011-11-15 20:53:19 +0000 UTC]

PFFT. In like... two years? Damned school *shakes fist*
But thank you so much! 8D

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Swayayso In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2011-11-16 01:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Awww So long, school can just really suck sometimes.
You're welcome

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Swayayso [2011-11-16 01:48:56 +0000 UTC]

It so can
OTL
At least I can... learn... Or something... PFFT.

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Swayayso In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2011-11-16 01:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes learning is fun.

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Swayayso [2011-11-16 01:55:52 +0000 UTC]

LEARNING.
o w o
I don't just... doodle and write all lesson. XD;

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Ariyaunna [2011-10-06 03:01:07 +0000 UTC]

H-h-he's not dead! He's j-just...sleeping! That's it!!

You write very well. I enjoyed this. All but the end. That was sad. But he'll wake up soon in Ellis' arms. Right? /Right/?!

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Ariyaunna [2011-10-06 14:50:50 +0000 UTC]

He's very very dead. XDD

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yiyang09 [2011-09-22 15:45:18 +0000 UTC]

wow so dramatic!! i love it!!

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to yiyang09 [2011-09-22 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much >A<;;

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Theres0only1number2 [2011-09-22 15:41:07 +0000 UTC]

I love it, it is amazing!!!

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Sefriu [2011-09-22 08:11:54 +0000 UTC]

This was heart-crushingly intense. Awesome way to describe Hard Rain and their emotions and everything. Really, really well-done. Damn, Nick... you were so close. But maybe it's for the best he doesn't know?

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Sefriu [2011-09-22 11:49:32 +0000 UTC]

A-ah. You really think so? Thank you so so much! I always enjoyed the macarbe atmosphere in Hard Rain, it's one of my favourite campaigns.
And I know! Nick was so... Close... But things may have ended up being pretty awkward for Ellis if he'd gotten the words out XD

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MerlinEternal [2011-09-22 08:08:28 +0000 UTC]

great one

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to MerlinEternal [2011-09-22 11:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Marizzle229 [2011-09-22 01:38:59 +0000 UTC]

i wish i new more about how everything came to be! THIS IS SO GOOD! I ALMOST CRIED! i love how u described everything! Were u thinking of adding more?

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to Marizzle229 [2011-09-22 11:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Well since he's dead it's doubtful that I could expand it... I suppose I could write a prequel? I'm not sure, at the time it was just a very quick thing. But yeah, perhaps I could write a scene before it
And I'm sorry for making you cry! But also selfishly, I'm please that my writing could affect you in that way =w=

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Marizzle229 In reply to SignedWithAnEcks [2011-09-22 12:20:50 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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steppingskyward [2011-09-22 01:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Your brain scribbles are rather lovely, my friend! ...now i have to go read it again because i didn't hear the song with it the first time...drat XD

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SignedWithAnEcks In reply to steppingskyward [2011-09-22 11:50:26 +0000 UTC]

XDD I'm not going to ever complain that you want to re-read it! Never! And thank you very much, I'm thinking that I should do this kind of thing more often XD

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DeepDarkAndHidden [2011-09-22 00:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so sad. I love it! :3

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