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Published: 2003-01-18 19:10:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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You hold the gunTo my head
So shoot me
Nothing hurts more
Than unintentional pain.
You hold the knife
To my neck
So cut me
The blood a product
Of a death I deserve.
You hold the bottle
Full of tempting pills
So shove them all
Down my throat
Choking the adolescence.
You hold the ice
It lingers in your eyes
So look at me
Look at me
And kill me again.
You hold the anger I hold
For different reasons
So laugh in my face
Laugh because I messed up
And tried to fuck you over.
I LOVE THIS PAIN.
This pain reminds me
That I\'m still alive
You haven\'t DESTROYED ME YET
Because I can still write
This shit about you.
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Comments: 4
laurlooo [2003-01-19 20:52:45 +0000 UTC]
Raw angry ending=very cool Nothing like a good slap in the face to someone who's trying to bring you down, aye?
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blazeofdiscrace [2003-01-19 14:27:38 +0000 UTC]
The ending was definitly the best part. Really cool.
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phixion [2003-01-19 08:06:50 +0000 UTC]
The ending was probably the best part of it for me...very valid point offered. -nods- Seemed a bit dry in some places, but the overall product works nicely.
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nostalgicstar [2003-01-18 19:56:33 +0000 UTC]
the end made me laugh,
i really like the whole idea!!!
because this just fucking rocks my socks
and i can relate.. a lot
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