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Published: 2002-11-04 23:52:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description Physically, I can't move
I'm too afraid of what they'll think of me
These people I don't know
I'm so shallow sometimes

The beat from the bass flows into my heart
I want to jump around
But my knees won't bend, my feet won't leave the ground

Release me from the cage
I've locked myself in
Voluntarily? Probably. I'm scared shit to be myself
I'm scared shit of my smile

Push me back and forth
Hurt me, in a happy way
Rock me, with the steady rythm

I find comfort in strangers
I find comfort in sleep
Let me sleep on you while we wait
We can all wait together
If I loosen up

The world is forever symbolically changing
And never making much sense
But...maybe it doesn't have to
And maybe we could all learn to be ourselves
And speak up
Loosen up, lose some stress

Think of how boring our lives would be
If the trees never lost all their leaves
If we only knew one shade of blue
It could take a small shove from a friend
Or a stranger
To get me going...

...But I start to dance, and lose myself in what I love...
Life.
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Comments: 2

steve-o-mac [2002-11-07 01:56:21 +0000 UTC]

WOW, one of the best poems I've read in a while. good job!

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nostalgicstar [2002-11-05 00:02:29 +0000 UTC]

lol!! the concert! is that what some of this is about?
Push me back and forth
Hurt me, in a happy way
Rock me, with the steady rythm

I find comfort in strangers
I find comfort in sleep
Let me sleep on you while we wait
We can all wait together

because if it is, rock on! i love this! its so weird that we are cosmically connected. hmm i like this a lot, its a favorite! very good message. You only have ONE life, why spend it down in the dumps all the time..? you taught me that

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