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Published: 2003-03-05 00:48:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Let us compareBattle wounds
And write poetry
In which written
For a praise.
Let us compare
Battle scars
And drink the blood
That pours from our hearts.
Let us think undecidedly
Because apparently
Virginity means nothing.
Will us to burn
The crosses we worship
And read to me words
Of opportunity.
Will us to run
From all that we know
Stab me with
The sharpest tool you can find.
Will us to sing
Songs with no sound
Lyrics we never will see.
What it means
Is apparently
Nothing.
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Comments: 3
quite well done. i like the idea behind it. once or twice i was kinda brought out of it because i think the semantics were trite compared to the idea expressed, but other than that it is quite good.
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Wow I like this a lot. I agree with Donna also.. sometimes it's really hard to look on the bright side, because you think there won't be a bright side....ugh.. I can really relate to this though.
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Life is something.
Only you can take the consequence of finding its meaning.
Otherwise, it's just typical.. life is never nothing.
And hey, theres nothing wrong with 'comparing battle scars' sometimes it makes it all the better. i went .. four (almost) years without telling a single soul what i did. I didnt even know what i was doing until... 2 years ago. Now im finding closure. Great poem...sums up my feelings on everything exactly
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