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silentpixie — Seek in Your Own
Published: 2003-03-14 11:27:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 43
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You can\'t see my scarsBut I remember where I cut
The tears didn\'t stain my face forever
But I remember when I cried
My heart will pump the blood to my veins
But I remember why it broke.
I would sleep forever.
I would sleep forever.
I would sleep forever.
Sleep, my only escape
From her
From the roads she\'ll take
From you
And the closeness you came
Intimacy
Intimacy
With other girls
In old times and lost days.
If I were you
I would miss it.
Break up or break down
These are my two choices
The decision I am left with
In one way, has already been made.
Die alone or live dead
Those are the inconveniences
Life won\'t spare you
And this is what pills are for.
Compact little things
They\'re full of memories
They\'re full of relief.
Depression, a running fad you say
I am on in a million
Who will think this way
I am alone with the crowd
Alone with crossed lines.
And those decisions to be made?
I will never decide.
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You can't see my scars
But I remember where I cut
The tears didn't stain my face forever
But I remember when I cried
My heart will pump the blood to my veins
But I remember why it broke.
I would sleep forever.
I would sleep forever.
I would sleep forever.
im in love with that
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Not a bad poem. Seems a little to me that the only reason you put the pic with it is to get alot of easy pageviews, which seems a shame to me. Ah well, who am I to judge.
Like I say, not a bad poem...seems almost lyrical to me [with all the repetition], some nice imagery going on. Sorry if you don't like this comment, I'm usually much more constructive, but...
Linds.
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1.) youre not alone
2.) you have another decision -- you can forgive. Im saying that because i love you. thats the only way things are going to work out
3.) i love this stanza :
You can't see my scars
But I remember where I cut
The tears didn't stain my face forever
But I remember when I cried
My heart will pump the blood to my veins
But I remember why it broke.
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Wow !!!
Sad words to read - touching stuff...
Head up, if it's how you're feeling !!!
g
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sigh, this will be my second comment on a poem. Hehe..
why so sad?
a bit weird poem, kind of ok i guess
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