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Published: 2002-11-07 01:46:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 238; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Description Love...
It's about looking into your eyes
And feeling so...happy.

Happy enough to last me...until our final good-bye.

It's like...these dreams I've had
Coming true in their own way
Because I've made them.

Sitting close to you
I can hear you breathing
To keep us both alive.

But I wouldn't dare touch you
It would break this moment.

Right now, we are frozen in our gaze.

You know what I'm thinking
And I'm letting you search me.

You're the only boy I really trust
You're the only boy I really know
Who doesn't want to hurt me.

And it gets harder to believe,
Because you did...and you do...

Thoughts like these used to fool me...
Made me think more of you
I'm so foolish.

After all, men only want one thing.

And boys like you have to beg.
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Comments: 6

laurlooo [2002-11-07 22:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Right on! :-D

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fatesmistake [2002-11-07 06:44:26 +0000 UTC]

i'm' thinking the same as ~island talker, about the format thing. but i love the message it's presenting...needs work i agree.

"You're the only boy I really trust
You're the only boy I really know
Who doesn't want to hurt me."

i like that stanza, it's how i feel about my boyfriend.

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nostalgicstar [2002-11-07 03:03:31 +0000 UTC]

tee hee.. guys do only want one thing and FUCK THEM for wanting and using NICE girls! like us. heheh good job

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islandtalker [2002-11-07 01:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Ok, you trick me into reading this with your photo.


Hmm.. Im not sure if I like it or not. Some parts flow really good, somes dont. Maybe its the format, or rather how it is not format at all.

I think the idea is there, but needs a bit of work...

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steve-o-mac [2002-11-07 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, good job

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exteknik [2002-11-07 01:50:20 +0000 UTC]

"To keep up both alive."

Is that a typo? Just wondering. Anyways, I like this, it's the classic tale of what you thought were genuine intensions going to shit because the guy hasn't grown up yet. It'll get better, I promise.

Not all of us are after one thing.

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