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Published: 2003-01-02 04:57:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 18
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I look forwardTo the night
To sleep
To dream
The morning moon
Pins me to
The pink sheets
How dare you wish
How dare you call me
Perfect.
Perfect people...
I've tried to impress them
To put my pen to paper
But writing...
Oh writing, it just doesn't
Come so easily
Not lately
Writing...
GOOD writing, just doesn't
Really please me
Not anymore
Blue jays sing
To me, you, her...
And it's early
But what's so sad
My darling
Is that maybe
Just maybe
I've lost my edge
And the words
I can't be proud of.
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Comments: 4
ignite [2003-01-03 01:04:05 +0000 UTC]
i enjoyed reading this as well, especially,
The morning moon
Pins me to
The pink sheets
How dare you wish
How dare you call me
Perfect.
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nostalgicstar [2003-01-02 18:29:42 +0000 UTC]
You know what, just because you're not happy with something doesn't mean that its not good. Infact, i think you are one of the best writers that i have ever read anything from. And no, im not saying that because your my best friend, im saying that out of TRUTH and honesty.
You dont write like everyone else...you're not in it for the pity, or the glory. You do it because its what you like to do.
More importantly, this is good...i think we all experience writers block at sometime. Nevertheless,
i love you
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matt-pmr [2003-01-02 18:29:35 +0000 UTC]
Word yo. I haven't been able to write anything I was really proud of lately either. Maybe there's not enough going on with me. You'll write something super awesome soon though.
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ethereal- [2003-01-02 15:54:30 +0000 UTC]
I am experiencing writers block as I read this. I enjoyed the poem though.
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