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silentpixie — Suicide is Waiting
Published: 2003-03-08 13:33:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 25
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I can\'t really feel itYour perfume was so strong
That night
It\'s all I can remember
You wanted nothing more
And nothing from me
Whatever moves you
Was I too perfect?
I\'ve given up in a good way
I guess that\'s the best way
To die
Because nothing
NOTHING
Will stop us now.
It was one night
One night too soon
And you\'re gone
You\'re gone with the sun
Just like this dream I had
Where old loves turn around
They live again
They\'re new again
\"Travel the road once paved over
And while you\'re at it
Kick the dust and dirt into my eyes.\"
I received a long, sharp knife
For my fifteenth birthday
Thank you God
For delivering such a lovely gift
Now for two hours in the shower
I\'ll find peace with pain and blood
Am I too blunt?
It\'s too bad, I wore long sleeves
For two weeks
The scars now don\'t even show up
I\'M JUST NOT GOOD ENOUGH.
You\'re getting annoying really fast
Take one step back
And really
LOOK AT ME.
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Comments: 2
Wow this is amazing.. I can really feel the emotion. I like how it's not a certain scructure, gives it a good feel. Gorgeous
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I found and saved that same EXACT screenshot. But anyway.. lol
Great poem, a few points that i espically enjoyed::
"I've given up in a good way
I guess that's the best way
To die
Because nothing
NOTHING
Will stop us now."
I like how you exaggerate 'nothing'.. Gives more of a sense of impossibility and the futile-ness of it all, without really saying so directly. Er... i liked this part as well::
"It's too bad, I wore long sleeves
For two weeks
The scars now don't even show up
I'M JUST NOT GOOD ENOUGH."
Many people can relate to that...And its funny because you look at yourself, and you want them to go away, but other times your just staring and you have to ask yourself if your scars are ALL you have to prove. Great job
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