carlos-teran [2003-02-28 17:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Podria decirte que, me gusta. Siento que la idea es muy buena. Facil de comprender. Instead or "correr", use "corre"... and "todo lo que tienes es a ti" on the first line. That's the only thing I feel is lost in the grammar. On the other side, It's lovely.

It should read like this, I think:

Todo lo que tengo, eres tu
Tu me explicas
Me enseñas todo lo que sabes
Por favor, quiero ser como tu
Me ayudas a ver mis sueños
No quiero estar aqui
La vida...
Me dice: "corre"
¿Ves?
Puedes verme
Lo sabes, pero no dices
Lo que sientes
Esta canción es para tí.

Gosh, it's beautiful.

You should do more poetry in spanish You have the feeling to it

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blinddesecration [2003-01-14 23:46:07 +0000 UTC]

i have no clue what any of that says but i LOVE that pic!!!

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laurlooo [2002-11-04 14:56:28 +0000 UTC]

You are beautiful

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tenaciousart [2002-11-03 04:32:09 +0000 UTC]

I know not a single word in spanish, but this seems pretty rigid...

hahahahahahahaha...

well then, nice work!

ich bin der bleistift.

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sc4b [2002-11-03 03:15:00 +0000 UTC]

its good, i dont think you got some of the grammar right, but the point comes across good.

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