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(For best view, please download and view in full resolution)Second piece towards my latest project called: Above the clouds. This piece took me around one hour and half to make and i would say im quite happy with the results, but if you have a suggestion please do aim it towards me.
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Many thanks to the following for their great stocks:
• The Boat: [link]
• Vulture: [link]
• Cloud 1: [link]
• Cloud 2: [link]
• Moon: [link]
• The man: Purchased from istock..
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Umarachnea [2010-02-23 09:31:23 +0000 UTC]
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Well, to start, the image and theme are beautiful. It is a very skillful, even masterful display of photo-manipulation.
One thing that feels off, after careful observation of the image, is the lighting. While "luminosity" and overall light are carefully blended together, to create what seems like a unified image, the light direction is not.
If you look at the boat and the vulture (is it?) the light is hitting from right to left. While the clouds and moon suggest the light coming from left to right.
This is by no means a deal breaker... for it does not show at first sight, and most might not notice it. However, it is there.
As a possible solution, I would suggest flipping horizontally the clouds and moon separately to keep the moon where it is... the reason being that the composition is beautiful.
It is a very interesting project... and an admirable effort. Thank you for sharing!
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SilverButton In reply to Umarachnea [2010-02-23 09:37:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your great attention to my work, At the last day of editting this i had noticed this matter but i was being extreamly lazy and could not be bothered with editting anymore, i wanted to move on.. lol
I guess your method of flipping the images horizontal could be the fast solving solution to this problem, i will most certainly try it out and get back to you at this for your honest opinion, Thanks a million for the detailed critique!
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Umarachnea In reply to SilverButton [2010-02-23 10:02:41 +0000 UTC]
haha, I get the laziness... i sure have been there, and I don't do as elaborate work as yourself... but merely post processing some of my images.
You're welcome for the critique, it is a wonderful way for me (or anyone) to keep learning and improving my attention to details... again, thank you for sharing... but mostly, thank you for the kind words
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darckdaemon [2010-04-07 17:41:50 +0000 UTC]
~ Ethereal. I am so enamoured with the night sky. What lovely contrast between the deep polished ebony of the flesh and the pale luminescence of the clouds. Magnificent work.
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SilverButton In reply to darckdaemon [2010-04-07 18:33:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a million for your lovely words
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Lin-Lilium [2010-03-01 17:50:41 +0000 UTC]
u do it in one hour and half
its look so crazy a man how sailing in the sky...wonderfull ^^
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SilverButton In reply to Lin-Lilium [2010-03-01 18:15:50 +0000 UTC]
hehe wild idea.. i know lol
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sypherianlp [2010-02-27 03:17:35 +0000 UTC]
That looks really cool. I like how it looks like he actually is paddaling through the clouds
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SilverButton In reply to sypherianlp [2010-02-27 04:56:40 +0000 UTC]
glad you like it my friend
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SilverButton In reply to jennystokes [2010-02-24 22:46:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and I think there is plenty of space, so come on board?
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djerebus [2010-02-23 18:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. What does the vulture represent in this image?
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Babilon1981 [2010-02-23 09:29:17 +0000 UTC]
very good job , the only things that needs some more work are the light...the main light is blue,but the boat and everything inside it are not affected at all...Anyway great job
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SilverButton In reply to Babilon1981 [2010-02-23 09:32:06 +0000 UTC]
main light is the sun light.. sunlight isnt blue lol
thanks for the great compliment my friend <3
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