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Published: 2014-06-06 01:43:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Hehe, well, I guess I'm showing a little different side of my personality in this one.This is 's character, Coraline. She commissioned me forever ago to draw her, though I don't know if this really counts, given what it is.(She was being awesome since I had just opened them and they were dirt cheap at the time) I also wanted to draw a gory Cora to go with the Gory Jerry I drew, but a while back it somehow came up in a conversatio of Cora having nipple piercings, and I was really into the idea(don't ask, my mind is a terrifying place), and I drew one picture of it, but I wasn't really completely happy with it.
So, she had the idea of combining the two, along with a little insight to her and Jerry's relationship in bed, and I came up with this. I'll probably color it at some point, but she's got a lot of scars, and I know it'll be a pain.
Ashey is welcome to color/make lineart, but anyone else must ask us both, as this in not my character. I also streamed the entire process of this sketch, my livestream link is in a journal(I don't have the patience to mess with the link thing right now), or on the last few deviations I've submitted.
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*flops in*
More critiques!!!
-Her arms are -extremely- thin and again, different lengths. The left is a bit long when it's supposed to end near the belly button. They're quite a bit thin, not only for the character (sorry, me nitpicking >3>), but in general also. This isn't something that I can really explain, it's just something that really needs to be observed and practiced. (Sorry D
-Her breasts are a bit... balloony? Bubbly? They left one is a bit off in placement, and a bit unnatural. Breasts (if this makes sense) connect to the arm in a way. If the arm lifts, there tends to be a line from the breast to the armpit (if that makes sense >3>), while this one is placed a little off and looks more like a lump pushed there rather than a breast. This, again, just requires observation, and is something that would be better served looking up tasteful nudes or something to try and get a feel for how boobs work.
-mmmm I think that's it???
I still love it by the way, but critiques were asked for so critiques I shall give, and if you want me to stop, tell me to shutup xD
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I waited a while to answer these, so I could ive real answered, not BSed ones.
Yeah, I went back and looked at it and all those things you said jumped out at me immediately, and I hadn't actually read the whole comment yet. Arms are the bane of my existence, so it would seem, and I might just start copying the first one and drawing over it to make sure they're the same length. I usually base their length off mine, which is probably bad, because I have long limbs in general, so my fingertips are about four inches from my knee.
WHY DO BOOBS HAVE TO BE SO HARD TO DRAW. THEY ARE ROUND LUMPS, JESUS CHRIST. I should probably start using stock for nudes, I know of a couple of really good stock accounts with amazing tasteful nudes.
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Haha, yeah, you think boobs would be easy to draw, they aren't sadly xD
It takes a while to get used to them
It's fun once you do though o3o
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*runs over to Sai*
I'm gonna stream lining this so... yuh :>
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WOO, COLORS AND LINES!
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