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silverlining — Strangers on a Train
Published: 2004-04-24 05:31:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Right now, this is just a blurb. But very probable it may become a full-fledged story. It's written more in my old style, although hopefully will have more imagery. Attempting to combine to get a more reader-friendly and easier style.I'm actually okay with this, unlike most of my stuff that I've churned out in the past months. As always, comments are appreciated!
Pretty please, with sugar on top? 
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Comments: 12
Nice! hehe....that girl sounds like me
The whole thing sounds very interesting (not really enough to give a valid critique though), you should definitely continue with it!
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eh, yeah, this piece definitely needs to be worked on....once I find time.
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Please, keep writing 
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cool 
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haha, you can tell this is gonna be goood.
i like arguments :B
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haha cool. glad you liked.
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woah thats good and the begining paints a icture with your words
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I hope the man makes her be quiet. 
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cool, glad you liked it!
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