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SilverwindBlade — Wylde Fyre - Chapter One
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Published: 2012-01-03 20:05:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 242; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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So, here's the first chapter of my new version of the Wylde Fyre story, and the 'official' background and story of my Fursona and personal character - or Sean - and his friends and allies.I originally began this story for NaNoWriMo, and I've been developing it ever since. I'm still writing more of the story, and this is only the first part of the story.
I'll be interested to see what other people think and have to say, and I hope you look forward to reading more of it in the future.
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Absolutely brilliant. You can read my reply on the forum of what I thought, but to be fair... I am not that knowledgeable on the stuff and I loved it!
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yo yo yo Mr Silver!
just finished reading it I liked it looking forward to reading more! The only problem I had was my own ignorance in jets and there weapon systems. The glossary did help thou!
Scragglefoot
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Yeah, I tried to include a lot of info in the glossary without making it as long as the chapter, so that it provided at least enough info to explain what the difference was between say, an AMRAAM and a Sidewinder, or an F-22 and an F-15 and why you'd use them at different times or for different things.
I'm glad you enjoyed it even though you weren't entirely familiar with such things though, as that means the story got across and it was exciting enough all the same.
Should be more coming soon! Stay tuned
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