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SinsofMidnight — Hurting and Healing
Published: 2011-09-24 08:27:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Hurting and Healing
7/31/2010

It's insane,
it's so surreal.
I see it all
but I can't feel.

This horrid pain.
it is not real.
No matter; I fall
though I do not heal.

This open wound,
this gaping hole;
but I am numb:
this wound is null.

Once like the moon
but now is dull
my heart is dumb
my pain is full

Oh that I
your pain could heal,
but I'm just a life
upon this wheel.

Do not ask why
that I may kneel,
may take this strife,
might make this real.
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Comments: 3

Phoneix-Faerie [2011-09-26 23:02:25 +0000 UTC]

I relaly like the rhyming scheme here

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SinsofMidnight In reply to Phoneix-Faerie [2011-09-27 06:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ I'm surprised I kept it through out the poem... I'm so scatter-brained at times...!

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Phoneix-Faerie In reply to SinsofMidnight [2011-09-27 18:34:39 +0000 UTC]

xD well done

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