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Published: 2012-08-28 14:40:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 369; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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One two three, one two threeYour feet know what to do
Carrying you graciously across the floor
One two three, one two three
You gaze up at your partner
Every thought is linked to his
One two three, one two three
Both of you are so close together
Your hearts are almost beating simultaneously
One two three, one two …
The last step, the final moment of being together
After this step your ways will part again
The serenity of the moment lost
Catching the glint in the other's eyes, unconsciously grasping your hands tighter
Three.
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Comments: 3
Sitsu-96 [2012-09-16 10:08:19 +0000 UTC]
Damn, I love this. You already caught my attention with the one two three haha!
Nice way of describing it, really brings up a story and the effect created by the last "One two three, one two …" and then putting the "Three." at the end is brilliant. I love it!
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SketchWriter In reply to Sitsu-96 [2012-09-18 16:15:10 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you so much!! , I really appreciate it
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PS Good to hear you're still alive. I almost thought you were completely gone...
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Sitsu-96 In reply to SketchWriter [2012-09-18 19:11:54 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
Haha, yeahh, the problem is that I hardly have time to put a computer on, and everytime I do so you aren't online on msn
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