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Published: 2010-12-14 22:42:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 3420; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 126
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abstractart5 [2016-11-30 05:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting presentation

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ala33 [2013-07-22 20:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Total humilation torture hanging in the sun with shaved heads.

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cordefr [2010-12-16 10:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Your comments good or bad
You asked for it...

It's an interesting picture, as we see the tying up "in progress" so to say. The sunrise in the background is a nice idea as well.

There seem to be a few things wrong, IMO.
- The women left and right are already hanging from the poles. I think that it is therefore impossible that the elbows are bend. It would be far more natural that the elbows are straight and the knees bend. As is they seem far too relaxed.
- There seems to be a second light source opposite to the sun, causing the reflection on the red outfits, for instance. That might be possible, maybe it's a second sun or something, but the would have to be shadows as well. On Earth the dying sun would put everything we see in the shadows.
- One would expect some struggling of the girl in the center. Again she seems far too much at ease.
- The light stripes on the sea don't come from the direction of the Sun as they should. You probably moved the Sun to a better place, without moving the sea.
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sl28694 In reply to cordefr [2010-12-16 13:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Points taken in the spirit in which they are made, with thanks. You are probably right about the bent elbows, more attention to the effect of gravity on the body is needed. Relaxed is impossible when tension is involved. Also the girl in the middle is motionless because i havent figured out how to imply movement in a static image. The whole background is an afterthought, i did everything else and simply added the background. I appreciate your comments and i hope i will improve with time. Thank you so much......

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