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Published: 2004-03-28 18:12:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1615; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 564
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SparsityNoah Levin and Ryan, 2004
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*onyx sent me a render one day and so I spent about 4 days working really hard to come up with the image above. Unfortunetly due to Ryan's inactivity online, I had not one opportunity to ask him how he liked things, if he wanted touch ups, or if I could even submit this image. I couldn't even get his last name for the description.
Nevertheless, I choose to not hold back this image for a few days in my harddrive due to these issues. I hope you like the result as much as I do. I hope Ryan enjoys it too.
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Comments: 47
Love it
reminds me of gackts music video for Vanilla
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great brushing. 
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*quick voice*Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!Oh my God!
This is bloody hell awesome, Slash-X....Some awesome shit your got up there, dude, lol.*Adds to Favs*I espically love dark stuff.....
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awesome brushing and color, but i dont like the render its a lil flat neways nice img u 2!
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Looks amazing, great lighting effects and brushing. I think it would look better if the image was sharper.
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hey ro, im sorry for the inconvience, i just got my car back from my pops taking it away so ive been out all weekend, amazing image, i hope we can do another colab with more communication next time... sorry again
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nice work dude. nice render and cool brush work. keep it up.
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^ How sad. A piece like this should have at least 15 favs by now.
It rules. I love the dark atmosphere. It gives much depth to the render. Colors and brushing are neat too. ^_^ In three words I can describe this piece: 'elegant and beauteus'. ^_^
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how did the typo turn out? thanks for the help by the way, this would suck without your input.
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My critique:
Concept:
I like the idea of the piece. The name goes well as well.
Effect:
Light striking the render is cool. Text could be smaller.
Render:
I like the shape, but I can't see it, and it's a tad jaggy.
Brushing:
Brushing is well done.
2d:
Everyone likes 2d, but I feel it's not needed in this piece. Still, text should be fixed.
Effort:
Good.
Overall:
Well done, but text and render visibility touchups would be grand.
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wow thats a great way to critique things, thank you so much!
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sweet...lools great! brushing is really nice and colors good chosen.
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Wow! Awesome-ness! love the color combination. keep it up! GJ. Brushing rulez!
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really nice brushing! That sucks that he wasnt on, doesn't really help the collab heh but you still did great!
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its good but ill give u one reason why i hate it cause when i see it i start to get desperate lol dunno why
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awesome stuff man, i just think its a bit empty
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wonderful lighting!! 
though the render could look a little more 3-d IMO, less dark maybe
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I guess I see your point bro, I tryed to work on shadowing on this piece, like placing light in the correct places in corresponding with the shadows and bright spots on the render.
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nice subtle brushing, its all very smooth and mellow. cool job, guys
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