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Sleeper-Desolate — __Miss You Tonight
Published: 2004-12-26 19:58:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description These broken promises scattered on the floor
Make me see that you don't know me anymore
Everyone has faults, things just fall apart
I guess I couldn't admit that, deep in my heart
Friendships dissolve despite everything you do
And all I wanted was to salvage things with you
I felt like I was working toward this goal incessantly
And you were somewhere else; where you wanted to be
I'll admit this feels surreal; with you gone
Sometimes I fear that my choices were wrong
I expect you to be there, still waiting for me
But I know now that you're never going to be
And yes I feel betrayed; like this is what you wanted
And while I'll never be sure, you'll always keep me haunted
Look towards the future, where everything is bright
But all I want is to miss you tonight
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poetic-abortion [2004-12-31 01:16:37 +0000 UTC]

this one on the otherhand is great.
all throughout the rhyme flowed.
beautifullly done!!!

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to poetic-abortion [2004-12-31 16:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!


This is my favourite of the newer stuff I submitted.


I'm really glad that you liked it, and thank you for your comment.

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poetic-abortion In reply to Sleeper-Desolate [2004-12-31 19:21:11 +0000 UTC]

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