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Sleeper-Desolate — PAINT IT BLACK
Published: 2004-10-16 21:13:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description This view from my window is getting old
"You can't live in darkness" is what I'm told
"You have to venture into the light
Staying sad all the time, it's just not right"
Some things are easier hidden then erased
And it's MY choice to wear a frown on this face
You can't change me, far to many have tried
And I still remain empty, filled with these tears I've cried
Don't you dare paint the sky with rainbows
Because I like it black
It makes it easier to mourn
All the things that I lack
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Comments: 6

buffetcargal [2004-10-29 19:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I like this, especially "Don't you dare paint the sky with rainbows"; I just like the way it's so assertive. This is a great piece, well done.

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to buffetcargal [2004-10-29 20:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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Drowning-Sun [2004-10-17 00:11:34 +0000 UTC]

I like it's frankness, it's a great poem

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to Drowning-Sun [2004-10-17 00:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I've been very frank today.


Glad you enjoyed it!

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shaundj [2004-10-16 21:16:08 +0000 UTC]

hey this is very good indeed

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to shaundj [2004-10-16 22:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks... I needed a compliment. Glad ya liked it.

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