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And she watches TV showsOn the screen that she holds dear
She never turns the sound off
Because this silence is her worst fear
She's talking to herself again
Raindrops fall onto her head
Cold walks and damp socks
And leaving with the best of intentions
She is sorry
She is not good enough
She is weak
She has given up
You do not want her
Do not care for her
Oh, she is sorry
The rhythms are drummed out in a solitary echo
And everything she wants is every thing she's let go
She's fighting this, shaking her fists
She knows it's not too late
Oh, she prays it's not too late
Seven o'clock on a Friday night
Ooh, she turns out her light
No reason to stay awake
No reason for her heart to break
She is sorry
She is not good enough
She is weak
She has given up
You do not want her
Do not care for her
Oh, she is so sorry
She's better now, the doctor says
These words ring in her head
She combs her hair, falls into bed
She can't forget all the words you said
I won't forget all the words we said
I am sorry
I am not good enough
I am weak
I have given up
You do not want me
Do not care for me
Oh, I am SO SORRY
I wish you could find a way
I am sorry
I am not good enough
I am weak
I have given up
I wish you could find a way
I wish I could be better just for you
But I am not
I'm sorry.
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Comments: 19
skeevy [2004-11-05 05:57:19 +0000 UTC]
I wish I could hear the melody, but the lyrics are very nice.
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buffetcargal [2004-10-28 21:12:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is amazing. The photo really compliments the piece, good choice!
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to buffetcargal [2004-10-29 16:27:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it... and the photo.
I thought that it was really evocative... and it was pretty much how I was feeling when I wrote this, so it did fit very well.
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to anabeanado [2004-10-23 23:32:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu!!!
Glad you liked it!
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to anabeanado [2004-10-23 23:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu!!!
Glad you liked it!
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seducexthexstars [2004-10-18 15:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow That is so amazing,I can identify I think alot of people would if this ever becomes famous it would be a hit
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to seducexthexstars [2004-10-18 15:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! I wish I could sell it to someone who could write music for it and make it famous... but I'm too touchy about that sort of thing.
It'd have to be me singing it, and taking into account my voice, I doubt it'll ever be on the radio.
Thanks again!
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seducexthexstars In reply to Sleeper-Desolate [2004-10-18 15:17:30 +0000 UTC]
Have more faith in yourself,It a wonderful piece you never know what the future holds
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shaundj [2004-10-12 20:22:52 +0000 UTC]
awww the poor kid in the photo!
She's talking to herself again
Raindrops fall onto her head
Cold walks and damp socks
And leaving with the best of intentions "im not too keen on that part,, it dont seem to rhyme as well as the rest"
another great chorus......love how your songs really do build up to what seems like a powerful chorus
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to shaundj [2004-10-12 20:36:43 +0000 UTC]
I know! I saw the picture and just wanted to give her a hug. I always thought it was kind of interesting that everyone, a 2 year old or a 72 year old, sort of makes the same face when they're crying really hard; it looks like they're screaming really loud, their lips turn in... they just look so childish and afraid, like they've given up.
BAH! You've found my Weak Spot. I think, in every song that I write, there's this one part where I just can't seem to figure out what to say... and so I fudge it with something that isn't perfect. I really couldn't figure out what to put there... I want to change it... got any ideas?!
I'm psyched that you like my choruses, they're usually my favourite part, too. Especially this one... it's really personal, and it describes all that I wanted it to; exactly how I feel. *sighs* Sometimes I wish I could just write a song of choruses.
STUPID VERSES!
Thank you for the commentt!
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Drowning-Sun [2004-09-18 18:48:58 +0000 UTC]
wow..... thats all i can say, everything else has been said already!
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marigrace [2004-09-18 02:29:02 +0000 UTC]
excelent. pure genius. yet again you leave me speechless.
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to marigrace [2004-09-18 02:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Hehe... Gee thanks.
I'm 'static that you took something from it... that it made yeh harpy or sad or SOMETHING.
Thanks for the comment.
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Sleeper-Desolate [2004-09-17 23:39:25 +0000 UTC]
*thinks* Hmm... I dunno... will you promise to give me credit for it when you become rich and famous?!
And will you promise to get me a set of tabs/show me how it ends up sounding? I've always wanted to put my music to something other than a drum beat.
Note me... I think that it'd be very cool if you made this a song.
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lost-in-thought- [2004-09-17 23:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. I don't know any words to put down to make you understand how great this is.
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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to lost-in-thought- [2004-09-17 23:33:38 +0000 UTC]
...
That's the greatest compliment I could get. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it...
It's one of my favourite songs, I think.
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lost-in-thought- In reply to Sleeper-Desolate [2004-09-17 23:35:08 +0000 UTC]
I play guitar, if I could come up with music for it, could I use it?
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