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Sleeper-Desolate — Thank You
Published: 2004-11-28 03:42:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 201; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description For the many battles I have fought
The rage, the riddles, the whole lot
I've claimed to be so much alone
But you listened when I moaned

For the days when I'm not feeling so great
When dreams are quick and promises late
Hollow words rattle out of my shell
That I'm surrounded by ne'er do wells

But I want to set this record right
I want to make it ever known
You've kept me through the darkest nights
Because of you, I am never alone

And every girl's torrid dream
Is to paint for the world a dismal scene
My rantings depict a spoiled gloom
Fit enough to seal my social tomb

And there are days that I can't pretend
I'm not waiting and hoping for a swift end
But through it all I find my chums
Who lift me up when I'm feeling glum

But I want to set this record right
I want to make it ever known
You've kept me through the darkest nights
Because of you, I am never alone

You've put up with wretched rhymes
And melodramatic shit a thousand times
I owe you my sanity, my life, my fate
I'm giving you my thanks before it's too late

You haven't run out, haven't skipped town
For highs and lows, you are still around
This poem's for you, who've stayed to this end
I could not live without my wonderful friends

But I want to set this record right
I want to make it ever known
You've kept me through the darkest nights
Because of you, I am never alone
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Comments: 6

shaundj [2004-12-01 17:18:09 +0000 UTC]

your work gets better and better. your a star!

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Boosty [2004-12-01 16:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Dude, if I'm right this is the first piece of writing I've favourited or if it isn't its one of the first cos it actually damn well means something to me dude.

Thanks, its very cool to be your friend.

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Leherae [2004-11-28 21:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Kid, I'd never leave you alone, even if you payed me to...I couldn't bare it...and besides, where else could I go with my conversational menus and glasses of ice? It just wouldn't work with anyone else. You know, you're one of the greatest people I've ever met, and I count myself as lucky because I am your friend. A smile from you is a day well spent, in my opinion. so, thank you, my dearest friend for putting up with me.

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to Leherae [2004-11-29 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]



Same here, Katie. I couldn't have said it better.


*looks at menu*


See, I'm listening.

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anabeanado [2004-11-28 20:16:01 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why Critique Discouraged. This is quite good

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Sleeper-Desolate In reply to anabeanado [2004-11-29 00:06:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so.

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