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Published: 2008-01-14 13:37:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2237; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 16
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Page 2 of Mario & Luigi Dark Wrath.I was aiming to get this up on Saturday, but it wasn't finished by then. Sunday I was out. So I'll get it up now. I'm behind schedule.
A few things you might not get when you first read I'll help you understand.
Panel 5, the background isn't flames, it's still bushes. The flames in Panel 4 is to signify that Wario and Waluigi can't see the fire, or in another way, see the danger in front of them. Panel 6, Wario punches Dark Mario, which sends him back into the hold of Waluigi in P7.
P8, Wario punches DM in 2 places twice as a combo and gives a blow to send him to the floor.
You should get the rest. I hope.
Waluigi looks a bit odd in P8 too. Got the right arm wrong I think.
Kinda like the Mr L in last panel, and Wario and DM in Panels 1 & 2.
EDIT: There goes the scanner again with random dots in places. =/
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Wario: Mario, this is where we take you down!
Dark Mario: Down to the bank where you'll give your life's savings? OK then!
Wario: That's not what I mean!
Me: Reversal!
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I love your use of Mr. L. He's gonna appear in my series later.
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Oh, I will. I won't stop till this comic is finished!
Thanks!
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Weee page 2 :3 Whoa, D Mario's burning. 
I got a little bit lost in some frames, but that's probably me for not being very perceptive. 
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Maybe I should number the panels.
Or probably not. Good you found the order right in the end. Or did you?
Action lines? I'm probably thinking of something else, but haven't I already used em?
Oh, yes it is time. Watch out, W&W.
Cheers on that, about Waluigi's arm. I thought those 3 came out great too.
Thanks for comment.
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oh yeah, I see the lines now
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Oh, I know what you mean.
I didn't know the right text for sfx with throwing a punch(except when it hits), but now I see what I can do instead. Like for instance when DM rolls backward and is getting up by Mr L, I could've put "roll!" or something.
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Oh, I get what you mean. Didn't think about that.
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Aw crap. I forgot the bruise mark on DM's face in the last panel. >.<
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yes ive been waitng for the next page
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Woah, awesome. =O Waluigi has like, squash feet. X3 I don't really like that guy... He's mean to Luigi.
Anyway, I still can't wait to read more!
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Woo, thanks.
LOL, squash feet.
Until next week.
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