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Published: 2004-09-06 05:00:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 419; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 129
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Looks good! I enjoy the concept and the overall photo, in general it is well-done. But to be critical, the mirroring you did left a ot to be desired. Like it is quite obvious that you mirrored of course (the absolute center is where the problem is, where they overlap), but you also may notice that the left side is much more transparent than the right side mirror which made some stuff appear missing on the left... though on the bottom the left has something the right side doesn't. If this was intentional that's cool, I'm just pointing it out as it might represent a sort of inconsistency in the work.
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yeah I know I did th mirroroing. The sides are actually the same opacity and parts etc just it differs because of some of the gradientness etc.
Thanks!
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It looks great. But you should work on the edgy style, I mean it's here and there too grainy. The general idea is cool. Although I think you could kill some of the darkness out of the picture. On the other hand it looks weird and sinister. In general just try to smooth it here and there and it's perfect.
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Thanks. Yeah I noticed a little bit of that. I was impatient and wanted to finish it though so I didn't mess with it too much. I'll see what I can do to fix it up.
Thanks for your comments
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