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Bushaqua [2017-12-15 19:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Things I like about this art work:
Frills on sleeves
Hair sketch
Back ground line art
Hand and arms line art

Things to work on:
I think I would have liked it better if her face and features were symmetrical, the lips particularly look a bit off
Shadows are falling ever where and cant identify main source of light
The colors look very flat 
Nose and eyes are shaded 3 D, rest of the picture is 2 D
Shadows missing on the sleeve frills and there are no high lights

Suggestions and tips:
Keep the lighting simple
At least take 3-4 color shades for every color
Your line art is fine, keep working on color blending and lighting by using references and reading tutorials

Hope this helps, keep up your good work!

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ENavich [2017-12-03 15:20:23 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm here, from ProjectComment  ^^
I really like your work, it looks very cool! But there are a couple of nuances that I would like to tell you about. But this is my personal opinion so do not take it too close, ok?  

Firstly, I would like to say about her right hand. I had a feeling that it was not her hand but someone else's. Аnd she just put someone's hand under her head to make it softer  

I also wanted to mark the fingers on her left hand. They are unnaturally stubborn. It seems as if she is showing off her beautiful fingers to someone. haha^^

I also really want to revive her eyes, because she looks like a beautiful dead doll, unfortunately. Add highlights to the eyes and she immediately changes, you'll see. I would also add a couple of small glints on her lips.

I really like her black wavy hair. They are beautiful. I really like the curly strands of hair on her arm, but if you had added a couple of thin lines and white curls on black hair, it would be simply delicious. 

This concludes my criticism. The only thing I would like to add is that your work is at a very good level. I really like that you in your drawing are basically just pure and open colors, it's commendable because I almost do not practice it. You have a good style, I like it) develop and practice your skills, you're done well)  

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Fyoriosity [2017-12-01 22:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Hi! I'm here, from ProjectComment  
I'm going to try to give you some helpful criticism, but I'm not sure I can criticise a lot ^.^' Your stuff looks generally very cool,
and I'm not sure I'm on that level of drawing yet.

What's great is definitely the vibrant colours. While vibrant, they aren't too much, and they balance out nicely in the whole picture.
I really like the shading around her elbows and cheeks, and I love the soft shading in her eyes.
You also have some pretty solid lineart going on

I think for this particular picture, you would have to make the pupils a little darker. I've been browsing
your gallery and it looks really great in the other pieces, it's just here where I think they don't quite match.
Another thing you could probably improve is the shading of all the items around her.
I think there is still some detail you can get out of this piece by adding individually colored shadows for the
individual items, and some highlighted parts as well

Otherwise, I think your art is on a really great level, and you keep constantly improving,
so I was wondering why you have so little resonance, especially since your style
is pretty popular right now. You should definitely get out there and show more
people, because you are already great, and on a really great way to get even better!!!
Keep it up ^w^

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ATouchOfSalt [2017-12-01 13:16:52 +0000 UTC]

This is a lovely, vibrant drawing with lots of life. However, there is one very distracting quality. The eyes are spread too far apart. The eyes should be one eye apart from each other. (If that makes sense)

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ShyLunaArt [2017-12-01 11:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Incredibly beautiful, I like how you do your style!

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Codebreak33 [2017-12-01 07:40:17 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty!

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