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Published: 2017-11-10 10:03:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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My family lost to a clap of your hands
brought back by the sound of your drum
memories of you in every breath
your breath in every whisper
every whisper, I'm taken back
to the flash of a car that ended it all
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Comments: 7
softstorms [2017-11-14 08:02:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you all for your wonderful comments
Zontickles thesepticscorpion TerraSkull
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thesepticscorpion [2017-11-10 10:33:22 +0000 UTC]
amazing work that goes so deep..well done!
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TerraSkull [2017-11-10 10:20:26 +0000 UTC]
quite a poem. so much story in just a few lines. i love it.
so sad though.
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Zontickles [2017-11-10 10:13:01 +0000 UTC]
that's quite deep, brings a very sad deep feeling and that's good! great work!
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