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Published: 2016-10-19 23:36:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 5123; Favourites: 129; Downloads: 0
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Description "Don't ye fockin' die on me Mark..."

After reading extensive wingfics of various ships and fandoms (*cough**cough* mostly Destiel *cough*), I felt greatly inspired to draw more Septiplier H+Ell. I am honestly addicted to Wing!verse anything, and the idea of fiddling around a bit more with it highly appeals to me, so more of this particular AU may be coming up more. 

This one is more tragic than happy.

I wanted to do a flight scene, but not one where the two are engaged in a Courtship flight or a race. SO LET'S MAKE SOMEONE CRY. 

Jack is supposed to be higher up in the air than Mark, which explains the skewed view and why Jack appears to be bigger. 
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It was supposed to be a quick victory. A defense skirmish on the very edge of Heaven - a brigade of demons soaring and clashing left and right with angels.

Mark surveyed it all from higher up, pink wings beating the air in massive strokes, looking for an opening and a possible chance to turn the tide. The attack had been sudden. Unexpected. And though he had faith in his brothers and sisters, at this moment they were losing.

He felt the sharp, agonizing pain of the arrows' bites before he heard them stab into his wing - the sickening thunk and high-pitched whistle as they hit their target. He almost blacked out from the pain. His right wing spasmed, twitching as he roared in pain.

His left wing pumped the air faster to try and compensate to stay aloft, but was failing, and in mere moments he was falling. He crashed through the battle, being knocked around like a rag doll, going into a tailspin. Barely keeping concious, Mark had just enough sense to tuck his left wing as close to him as possible - having lost total control of his right. Catching the blunt end of am explosion and hitting another angel's shield on the way down (the blow hitting the top of the wing pierced with arrows) broke it, burned his primaries, and sent Mark into total unconsciousness. Mark fell, limp and appearing lifeless, racing towards Earth like a stone.

Jack spiraled and swooped upon the enemy, slicing through his opponents left and right. His men were winning, and they would soon break through the barrier to Heaven and begin reaping more souls.

The usual thrill of battle was lacking this fight - his standoff and guilt towards a specific angel quarrel ed with his orders constantly in his mind and heart - and the green-winged demon was jerked out of his thoughts as a familiar blur of pink feathers and silver armor rushed past him... downward.

Mark.

Not even thinking, his wings immediately snap closed as Jack goes into a sudden dive. The sight of blood matted on once-pink feathers... the stench of burned flesh... it made Jack sick.

Panic rose inside him, and he reached out for the other.

He had one chance.
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Comments: 38

SnowyGodenheart [2018-08-08 19:49:51 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible and (yeah Destiel is very inspirational couple especially with wing ideas). I am going read all these because my interest is spiked to see what all happens. Nice touch putting pink rather than red for the wings it gives more that Markiplier vibe.

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to SnowyGodenheart [2018-08-08 22:30:50 +0000 UTC]

I agree, that pairing has given me many ideas over the years! I appreciate that it caught your attention and that you like the stories! Than you! I definitely thought pink would be much better as an "angelic" color rather than red. 

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SnowyGodenheart In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2018-10-04 21:22:03 +0000 UTC]

I agree with that 100%

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to SnowyGodenheart [2018-10-05 22:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you do! 

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AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-04 01:43:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm not even going to lie when I say that this story thus far is extremely interesting. I love the character designs and I can't help but admire your creativity!
You've earned a watcher!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-04 01:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Hahah, I appreciate it greatly, but there isn't much story other than the descriptions I've given. XD Thank you very much, though! Aww, thanks!!!

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AlexandraInsanity In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-11-04 01:56:16 +0000 UTC]

I still really enjoy what you have going on here, I think it's fairly unique!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-04 02:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Again, thank you so much! I've not seen many wing!verse Jack or Mark drawings or fanfictions, and I wanted to fill the niche a bit. It's one of my favorite facet AUs, but I wanted to give it my own spin.

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AlexandraInsanity In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-11-04 18:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Same, it's really a shame that there aren't as many as there should be. Wing!AU'S are one of my favorites.

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-04 20:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Agreed wholeheartedly. I wouldn't mind doing a few one shots here and there, but I'm not sure about fanfiction.net. I might just get and Archive account and see what happens.

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AlexandraInsanity In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-11-05 19:11:36 +0000 UTC]

I actually know a really good Septiplier story based around Mark having wings, I've read through it all already so If you're interested In reading I can give you the link!
And Also,
A "Archive Of Our Own" account sounds like a great idea!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-06 00:14:12 +0000 UTC]

PLEASE DO YES! XD

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AlexandraInsanity In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-11-06 16:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Here, It's five works and they are all really well written! Probably my favorite Septiplier story thus far. 

archiveofourown.org/series/367…

They are all apart of the same series!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-06 21:07:30 +0000 UTC]

BLESS YOU

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AlexandraInsanity In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-11-06 21:13:47 +0000 UTC]

<3
Same to you!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to AlexandraInsanity [2016-11-06 22:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww

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RyamuDA [2016-11-01 23:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Really nice! makes me want to do some fanart of this, if that would be okay? :3

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to RyamuDA [2016-11-02 16:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Go right ahead, I'd love to see what you have in mind. Just remember to credit me, and it'd be fine. I can't wait to see it!

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KathrynPattison [2016-10-23 18:46:43 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't help but hear this song whilst reading your description

www.youtube.com/watch?v=VTdHU4…

Especially 1.38 for looking at the picture at that moment

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to KathrynPattison [2016-10-23 22:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Actually it kinda does fit the mood I was going for, though more heroic. I like it!

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KathrynPattison In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-10-24 01:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's what I thought when I first saw your picture!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to KathrynPattison [2016-10-26 16:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Really cool!

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Known4evr [2016-10-22 19:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Please make this into a fanfiction I need to know the ending Q~Q

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to Known4evr [2016-10-22 21:25:36 +0000 UTC]

I barely even know the beginning. 😅 Maybe someday!

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BobalobLOLLOL [2016-10-21 23:17:55 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS AMAZING!!! (and heartbreaking)

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to BobalobLOLLOL [2016-10-22 13:56:18 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU, ENTHUSIASTIC VIEWER! (it only gets worse from here, maybe)

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RandomGamerSara [2016-10-20 00:59:15 +0000 UTC]

this is so stunning! just the emotion that's shown! I like it! Great job! ^_^

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to RandomGamerSara [2016-10-20 01:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it.

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RandomGamerSara In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-10-21 02:06:41 +0000 UTC]

no problem! keep up the great work

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to RandomGamerSara [2016-10-22 14:13:05 +0000 UTC]

I will!

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marvelgirl1701 [2016-10-20 00:02:49 +0000 UTC]

damn, that looks so cool! Great job!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to marvelgirl1701 [2016-10-20 01:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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D2Diamond [2016-10-19 23:51:54 +0000 UTC]

I really want more to this story, and the picture is great!!

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to D2Diamond [2016-10-20 01:58:54 +0000 UTC]

I might do one shots or even a chaptered piece for this AU if the demand is high! The reason why I don't do fanfiction much anymore, or comics, is because I have trouble staying motivated enough to finish them. But I'm really glad you like it!

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D2Diamond In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-10-20 13:34:55 +0000 UTC]

I understand completely. I'm editing for a writer on AO3, and we had a discussion about the same issues just last night. She submits chapter by chapter to stay motivated. I prefer to write out the entire story, edit and proof read before submitting. Sometimes you just need to find what keeps you motivated to continue. If you ever need an editor or just a cheerleader to help you stay motivated to write out an entire story, feel free to contact me. I'm offering free services right now. I'd really like to see more of this story. Its' a great idea. If you'd like to see what my writing skills are, I have a few stories published on Wattpad and AO3 under the author's name DiamondWinters.

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to D2Diamond [2016-10-20 14:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's really cool! I had a friend of mine in high school who helped me stay motivated on my fanfictions, but we sort of fell out of touch and she's at college now.. Haven't spoken to her in months. :/ I thank you deeply for offering, that's very very kind of you! I've been thinking lately about deleting my Fanfiction.net account and creating a Wattpad or an Archive Of Our Own account - they seem a lot easier to use. I'll definitely keep you in mind, I really appreciate it! Mostly I'll just be drawing miscellaneous doodles of the 'story' (since there really isn't one yet) to string together into a story if I get around to it. Again, thank you so very much, you're a very kind person!

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D2Diamond In reply to Solar-S-Shift [2016-10-20 20:37:33 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome. I look forward to your next creations. I'm very enthralled by your story and would love to see more of it. And yes, please let me know if you'd like some help/support. <3

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Solar-S-Shift In reply to D2Diamond [2016-10-21 10:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Will do!

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