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SolusFallenwolf — You Are...
Published: 2012-09-01 09:57:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 285; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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Description you are the one,
set in my heart,
keeping me stright,
from falling apart.

you are the one
i cry over at night,
i miss you even more,
when i turn off the light.

you are the one,
that is set in stone,
our love mostly dealt,
over a phone.

you are the one,
that makes me fight,
get up every morning,
and step into the light.

you are the one,
that is crystal clear,
with you by my side,
had nothing to fear.

you are the one,
that is right for me,
been blind all this time,
now i see.

you are the one,
that is my other half,
no matter how many girls have made me laugh.

you are the one,
i'm sorry my dear,
it took too long,
now i'm left in tears.
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Comments: 4

CalleighBlack [2012-09-06 01:03:42 +0000 UTC]

A real friend will like/love you no matter what. But...you have nothing to worry about here lovely, because it's brilliant and who cares about caps and punctuation. You gotta capture what's on your heart while it's there. screw proper form. I like what I see here, and i'm looking forward to seeing more of it....but ya know, you can come by and be all sarcastic and funny on my page any time atall...

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to CalleighBlack [2012-09-06 03:51:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear ... also I care about punctuation and grammer,,, as does the person this was writ about lol.. i just normally spit it on the paper, then reshape everything after it's all done lol

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CalleighBlack In reply to SolusFallenwolf [2012-09-06 12:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, well, I admit...I do care about it to some extent as well, but I think that the art is more important than rules.

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SolusFallenwolf In reply to CalleighBlack [2012-09-06 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

a-ha! see.. while it is nice to look at in a raw state, it's even better to see when it's finished.. that'll probably be tonights project if i can remember lol

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