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Round One: Recluse's Gambit
Round Two: A Light Shining in Darkness
Round Three: Up and Over and Out
Round Four: Can't Look Away

And you thought this would never appear! I'm not as happy as I could be about how it turned out, but I'm satisfied enough with the appearance to upload it now.

And yes I had to eyeball the pose and appearance from a reference because I can't draw dogs very well

For what it's worth I've probably tripled my knowledge of canines just by doing a tad of research. I'm not exactly the biggest dog buff out there, y'know?

Speedpaint video

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Name: Erx
Breed: Border collie
Age: 4
Gender: Male
Height: 2' 1"
Length: 2' 4”
Weight: 32 pounds
Fur: Dark brown-black/light gray
Eyes: Sky blue

Physical- Erx is a medium aged dog with an exhausted look and unfathomable blue eyes. His brown fur obscures a cluster of puncture scars on his chest, which ache painfully at times. The flesh of the base of his left ear is punctured, occasionally causing it to droop. Most of his teeth are still intact, although those in the back of his mouth are starting to yellow. One of his front incisors is chipped.

Erx is not exactly a fighter. He prefers to escape danger before it begins by taking advantage of his peculiar sight, which can gleam through thin walls to detect the presence of other moving things. Whilst doing so he must concentrate and gaze intently at the barrier. Yellow glows soon appear which indicate movement. He cannot sense things that are standing dead still, nor can he sense inanimate objects (unless they are in motion). The effect of this uncanny sight extends to viewing through darkness, which requires little effort and grants him a moderate cone of sight.

The means by which he senses the unseen is unclear. It would seem that he has a very primitive sort of below-visible light sensitivity, although this does not explain how motion relates to perception. Part of this ability stems from his acute hearing, and if he is deafened he has trouble pinpointing objects.

Personality: Erx has a surprising wit, given his "slow" look. However, he is absolutely crippled in the social sense. He stutters badly and speaks with poor pronunciation. While he understands a respectable number of words, he cannot always express them to others. This had led to more than one incident that ended in violence. He can easily offend another by confusing what he wants to say with what he actually says. The dog has a dim sense of written language, picked up from his short time in captivity. He can scrawl words, however misspelled, into the ground.

Erx is an insomniac, wandering the streets at night and day alike. At times he will sleep for less than four hours a day, which severely hampers his reflexes and coordination. He seems to wander in an attempt to find something, but what that something is cannot be determined.

Due to his physical weakness, he prefers to hide away from danger as stated above. Several years of close scrapes have left him wary of every scrap of concealment within a stone's throw, any of which could contain danger waiting to strike. For this reason he moves slowly and cautiously wherever he travels.

History: Erx's knowledge of his own past is limited to a short period in captivity followed by a murky escape. He wandered for miles, gradually winding towards the desolate city of Pripyat. He arrived there as one of the many tournaments began its swan song, exposing him to the gritty existence of the gray maze. The experience was disconcerting enough that he refrained from familiarizing himself with the other dogs, pressing him into a category of an outcast who never was.

Strengths:
  • Can gleam through many barriers and through darkness out to a moderate range
  • His keen hearing leads to an acute wariness for danger
Flaws:
  • Physically weak and somewhat fragile
  • Poor grasp of speaking- socially crippled
  • Often weary for want of rest
  • Easily dazzled by light and sound
Likes:
  • Gentle quiet (but not dead silence)
  • Isolation
Dislikes:
  • Crowds
  • Loud rackets
  • Speaking
Other:
  • He covets the rusted name-tag attached to his collar, although it seems to have fallen off.
  • His eyes catch light more readily than most, giving him the cat's-eyes effect at night
  • Unlike most dogs, he lacks red colourblindess. In fact, red appears unusually saturated to his eyes
  • When he wanders, he seems to search for his former master
  • Humor rarely affects him, whilst intimidation easily sways his vulnerable mind
  • His name was once "Rex", but he has confused the order of the letters and considers his name to be "Erx"
  • He was once deafened as a pup by a temporary illness and suffers a dire phobia of complete silence. The experience left him temporarily numb to his environment, robbing him of much of his perception
  • If Erx were to be struck blind, by the contrary, he could continue to sense the general whereabouts of creatures and the shape of his environment
  • His speech sounds like a mixture of Slavic and Russian tongues, although this accent is buried under his slurred dialect
  • He prefers to learn appearances rather than names and will frequently refer to others by their physical traits, rather than their name.
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Comments: 31

Mightyena26 [2012-02-28 13:21:58 +0000 UTC]

I have two questions about Erx for round three.

1) Prior to round three, does he have any injuries from the previous two rounds? I've skimmed your entries, but I want to make sure since I haven't had much time to read them thoroughly.

2) He refers to Molotov as "two-face" and Vully as "bat." Does he refer to everyone like this? If so, what would he refer to Zasha as?

Thanks.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-28 21:51:25 +0000 UTC]

As for injuries, he's gotten off more or less scot-free. He's a bit scratched up from his round-one activities (jumping through a gap in a pile of wooden debris). Round two was similar; he has some scuffs from the collapsing table business, but little more than that. It's nothing completely disabling, of course.

He tends to refer to people by their characteristics, not their names (he's terrible with names). He calls Beyra "rust fur" on account of his abnormal sensitivity to red, for example. Avi was "amber eyes". You can choose whatever you'd like him to refer to Zasha as- just pick some physical characteristic and go with it.

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-29 00:17:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Mightyena26 [2012-02-17 03:16:18 +0000 UTC]

One of the people I never imagined going up against, and yet here we are.

You are going to be difficult to beat, comrade. Your entries are always so nicely written.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-17 03:35:30 +0000 UTC]

I was about to comment on your reference first! Curses!

Ahaha, thanks. I won't be procrastinating this time around, either!

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-17 14:51:52 +0000 UTC]

So far, I have no ideas on how to defeat you. I might be awhile with my contribution to round three.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-20 17:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, I have to say that I'm just as aimless as you are. I'm picking a title and building everything from there.

Whatever happens, it's sure to be hectic.

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-20 18:15:02 +0000 UTC]

I have a bit of an idea, but I'm not sure how logical it would be or how I would lead up to it. Plus, I'm not keen on killing Erx. He's too...awkward and lovable.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-20 18:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Heh, you really can't hate him.

Yet.

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-20 18:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh snap. "Yet" cannot be good.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-20 19:00:19 +0000 UTC]

I'll speak no more = D

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-20 19:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Ohohoho. This should be interesting.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-20 19:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Anyhow, I'll have my cover up soon. Don't expect too much from me for at least a month, though, since I have

  • A rigorous editing process
  • Procrastination issues

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-20 19:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Depending on the round, I sometimes draw a cover. Hopefully, I will have the free time to draw a cover for this round.

I suffer from the same issues, comrade...

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Mightyena26 [2012-02-20 19:44:40 +0000 UTC]

My covers are just glorified image manipulations, so they're pretty quick for me to produce.

Onwards!

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Mightyena26 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2012-02-20 22:55:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm technically challenged, so mine are usually digitalized pencil doodles. But, they don't take long either.

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HeartinaRosebud [2012-02-10 11:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Erx is a cowardly collie!

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Songdogx In reply to HeartinaRosebud [2012-02-10 17:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Why don't you go grow up a little before posting on DA and stop acting like an immature child? Honestly how old are you, 10?

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HeartinaRosebud In reply to Songdogx [2012-02-11 01:32:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm 19!

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Songdogx In reply to HeartinaRosebud [2012-02-11 01:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Then act your age.

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HeartinaRosebud In reply to Songdogx [2012-02-13 08:47:15 +0000 UTC]

Did anyone say, "Erx is a coward!"?

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xDeadpuffx [2011-07-05 05:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Good luck! I might have to cameo Erx too!

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to xDeadpuffx [2011-07-09 03:09:20 +0000 UTC]

He will surely blend right in as it stutters his way through!

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xDeadpuffx In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2011-07-09 05:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Indeed?

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Songdogx [2011-07-03 02:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Erx finally shows up for the fun eh?

Erx: The Stuttering Insomniac

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Songdogx [2011-07-03 03:00:29 +0000 UTC]

I fear he will be mocked by other contestants. I'll make sure to have him report bullying to the proper authorities.

W-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-w-what?

Okay, too much stuttering

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Songdogx In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2011-07-03 19:10:01 +0000 UTC]

Yes I am sure that once he finds the proper authorities he'll be able to properly articulate his concern.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Songdogx [2011-07-03 19:43:19 +0000 UTC]

To solve this conundrum, he will simply need to find the authorities of those authorities and file a complaint.

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Shinkoryu14 [2011-07-03 01:26:13 +0000 UTC]

Alright, here's our review.

We're a little confused, you describe Erx in the bio as being "brown and light brown" but in the picture he seems to be black and white. And his "sky blue" eyes look pale purple.

If "Traits and flaws" are meant to be strengths and weaknesses, then it should be noted that having good reasoning skills and being prone to fright are personality traits, and "cannot sense motionless objects with his gleam vision" is a limitation on the power, not a true weakness. Despite that Erx does seem balanced, so if you can clarify the confusion with the visual you should be set to go.

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Someguyfromcrowd In reply to Shinkoryu14 [2011-07-03 02:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty. I went through a few changes between writing the reference and drawing it and kind of forgot to double check, so I've fixed that up. It looks like the eye colour was off because I went a little overboard on the details and wound up smudging a bunch of red into the blue. I've changed them to be a little more clearly blue, rather than some muddled tone of purple.

Should be more in line with the text now.

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Shinkoryu14 In reply to Someguyfromcrowd [2011-07-03 02:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Alright, we'll add your reference to the group. We look forward to seeing your audition.

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