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If I was to bare all to you
What would be your reaction?
Would you hold me
As the wracking sobs left my body?
What if I told you
I wanted to let go?
Just free fall to the end
Would you pull me back?
Tell me to hold on?
Or would you look on
As I slowly destroy myself?
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Comments: 8
DarlingAngel0565 [2013-10-30 16:18:05 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't let you go my sweet friend.
Just as you peer over the edge
My hand would reach out and pull you near
White wings would wrap around you tight
Whispering to you, "Not tonight"
You are precious dear one
And touch so many hearts
Hold on tightly
Because I won't let you fall.
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Soul-Reader In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2013-11-26 20:07:14 +0000 UTC]
I will add this, it is beautiful
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DaffodilLion [2013-10-26 04:08:40 +0000 UTC]
You are a real friend, you really care for people!
Your writing is so beautiful and lovely, it makes me cry!
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Soul-Reader In reply to DaffodilLion [2013-10-26 11:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow - thank you Thank you for your lovely comment, it means a lot
I'm glad you like it
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DaffodilLion In reply to Soul-Reader [2013-10-27 08:34:37 +0000 UTC]
That's ok, it did make me cry
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OddSmirk [2013-10-25 13:20:38 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't just hold you, I'd trap you. And never let go.
I'm possessive this way, you see... c:
Sounds very naked and very lovely. I don't even know.
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Soul-Reader In reply to OddSmirk [2013-10-25 19:43:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Nilla, you are a true friend
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