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spawnathan — Ignorance
Published: 2002-01-13 06:20:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 74; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Some die,we all bleed,
the seed grows in bounds.
The ground is fertile for the fruit
that stings the eyes,
and offends the nose.
The efforts made,
made in vain.
The gain does not attract us all,
but ignorance will cause us all pain.
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I don't know if I'm getting at a complete end thought for this one, but the thoughts brought up in this are wonderful. I like the word "bound" - it can have a few different meanings, and that really adds a nice element to the poem. Also the whole section of "the ground is fertile....offends the nose" is really very nice. It almost seems like the rhyme made between vain and pain at the end is a little trite, but not too much so. Again, a really nice poem! I like your style and the things you choose to write about are really great!
-muse-
be well
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