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Description A silent cry rings out, desperate to be heard
It fades away in the chaos of a thousand empty words
Would you hear these pleas of mercy?
They are begging to be received
Or will your eyes look to ignorance,
And see the empty bliss instead?
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Kirona [2012-12-29 17:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Is it just me or should people focus more on the poem and less on the punctuation?

Anyway, I like this poem a lot. It seems really sad to me, and (as would be expected in most cases for most people) I can also easily come up with how it could relate to my whole situation, though I'd rather not get into specifics on a publically visible comment

Either way, it's a good poem

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Echoing-DelCrystal [2012-12-29 01:45:39 +0000 UTC]

I dont think poems should have commas at the end of each sentences.I love this Specy

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Psyghostis [2012-12-28 20:31:54 +0000 UTC]

Flawed logic. You're presuming those 100 people won't agree.

That aside, I'd use commas at the ends of the first two lines, as well as the fourth.

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