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Published: 2013-10-25 05:48:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 513; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 1
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Description
Name: JaxOwner: ~Zamdorr
Gender: XY
Markings: Unique
Previous Conditions: New line opinion raffle. C: (opinion not necessary. C: )
Put a claim in the comments and add this feral to your favourites.
Raffle will be done in 24 hours.
Issues I'm looking into (ie, you don't need to mention them again. XD)
- positioning of rear paws
- potentially making the paws more lizard like than canine?
- Far wing positioning.
- Tail Fluff connection
*The tail fluff is supposed to be very minimal.
*The snout is supposed to be elongated to distinguish the feral from the garden and domestic.
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Comments: 52
Claim: Howahkan
I really like how the hair/mane looks, also the eye shape
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Very cute. Love the way the head is cocked. C=
Claim: Nymphaeacea
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Claim: Β Parizaya
This one is so pretty ;w; Β I couldn't say no.
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Claim: Greffen
I really love how the muzzle narrows.
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Fine I give, I wasn't going to claim dangit!
Claim: Lenny
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Claim : Dylan (Welsh from tide or flow)
Just, fantastic, and a little punk(but in the best way!) XD I like the /idea/ of more lizard-y feet but would lament the paws going because they're so lovely. Also, I adore his little smirk!
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*stares at intensely* I really like these! it's like the smae pose but from a different angle so we see the markings better. I will forever mourn the old lines but I think the change was certainly needed.Β
Claim: Espir
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Claim: JaxΒ
I love the way they are looking! The pose Really shows off the markings.Β
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Congrats, he is yours!
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Forgot to add wOW I LOVE THESE LINES CRIES.
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Claim: Lymph
I honestly think the back wing needs to be lifted by quite a lot, it just looks awkward.
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Claim: Lagarto
Interesting, the mane makes the Feral Avis now look like a creature with a badass attitude XD
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I apologize for my comment regarding the tail fluff and I take it back. Lol. I just read over the rest of the comments
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claim: Dorian
I am loving these new lines. In my opinion, the legs and paws look fine. But, I do think the tail fluff might look a bit more natural if it was more long instead of round, and a bit bigger. And the connection looks a bit too thin. And for the wing, it need to be moved up towards the neck more.
I hope this helps
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Claim: Drayton
I think the new lines are very refreshing actually!
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dA has seriously messed with the deviation descrips. I was having a fun time trying to add personalities without bolding them in Everis.
As for the Ferals, I LOVE the new pose.
Love the fur, Love the wings though the right wing looks too low.
The new face is growing on me since its truer to the species.
My only major dislike is the tail at the end is waay too small for me. Needs more tail fur/fluff or a less drastic transition from a huge base tail to a skinny tiny tail tip if the fur is supposed to be that minimal.
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The end of the tail is supposed to be smaller, as a feral would not have as much time to worry about grooming himself (the main would take long enough. XD). It's main use would be as a flyswatter. XD I like to think of it as regular lizard-like tail, but instead of coming to a point, there's a fluff of hair there.Β
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Ahhh, if my vote counts I totally don't want the paws going lizard like. LOVE the canine paws cause I think you mentioned a few times they are supposed to be!
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*mane. dammit.
Bed. Now.
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Yea I got halfway through typing before I realized that most huge changed are intentional.
I think the drastic change is something I will get used too xD
Also, I noticed that bit of purple that leaked onto the front legs before you fixed it.
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Shhh, what purple? XD
Also, by reading comments in the recent site update, I learned that if you use Ctrl+E when editing descriptions, it brings it up in html so you can get rid of all those extra < p >s and < spans >s. D:
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FFFF, guess I should read then instead of just cursing the dev team. xD
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Claim : Spence
Holy shit ! It's bootiful :'D We can see the markings a little more clearer now :'D
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Claim: Aigis
Personally, I love these new lines. Its a massive improvement over the last lines. The head has more shape and the fur has much, much more detail. The wings look more natural, and not so cartoony. However my favorite thing about it is the pose. The last lines were a hind view while this is a side view. It makes it easier to see markings and the shape of the body.
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I think the fur is my favourite part of the new lines. Cx
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It was a really close second. I already saw that people had touched base on the Β very few problems and didn't see any reason to re-mention them. The pose just looks more natural and makes it much easier to see what the creature looks like.
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claim Lendro
Its cute but it honestly looks more like dinosaur/cat now.. O_O
Dem paws
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The feral avis has always been a reptile-creature that acts like a cat. Cx
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Claim: TBN
I like it! The hands (claws/paws?) look almost canine to me, though. Not sure if that was intentional or not x3
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Yes it was. Cx
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Then they're perfect xD
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Is the condition to do the normal fave+claim raffle or do you need to include your opinion on the new lines with your claim?
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Just claim+fave and if you want to say something, that's fine. C:
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Not interested in competing for ownership, but some things were really bugging me so I whipped this up sta.sh/01woqfr5t69w
If you want me to explain anything just ask in the stash comments ^^
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Well, the tail is supposed to be smaller than the old ferals and the face is supposed to be longer. Cx Design choices when reworking the species group.Β
The front legs I will consider (besides the moving it back on the body, it looks slightly out of place there), but the back legs would look weird splayed out like that. Cx He's sitting facing away still, so having the rear foot pointing more towards the fourth wall wouldn't work.
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If you're going to keep the hind leg as is then the actual thigh/calf needs to be adjusted because otherwise the leg IS splayed out with an awkward ankle positioning as it is. The leg would have to be more tucked into the body to have the foot facing that direction comfortably.
Only reason I feel the fluff should be at least a little bit bigger (maybe not as big as I redlined it, but still at least twice as large as it is now) is that it feels disproportionate to the tail at least. So either the tail could be thinner/smaller or the tuft could be bigger. Otherwise it just looks weird, especially with the mane being so large.
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Hm, okay, I think I see what you mean. Cx Tomorrow maybe; if I get all the darned leaves in my yard cleaned up.Β
Also, regarding the tail; read my reply to piceous. Cx
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