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squashmequickly — These thoughts
Published: 2003-07-23 01:27:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description These thoughts in my head
they do not belong,
the more they continue
the more will go wrong.

I should try to change
and not just move along.
But to change takes courage
and I'm not that strong.
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jo-kr [2003-07-23 01:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Very whimsical, tho the last line of the first stanza doesnt fit well. Perhaps replace "will" with "they'll"? Great poem though!

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